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Moon Dance
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Meteor showers are one of the most entertaining shows in the Universe. If you haven't witnessed one then don't cheat yourself of the experience next time and the best part? IT"S FREE !!!!

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Heavens Moondance (Meteor Shower)

Shadows on the beach in the dark of night
Blankets over shoulders from a chill that might
Come from the ocean and play on your cheeks
Haven't been cold in over a week
Sitting here waiting for stars that move
Watching for meteors...cutting the groove
Tails of light trace the darkness
As balls of stars form a tender caress
Over skies of midnight blue
Chasing lights from me to you
Alone on beaches for hours and hours
Waiting for this meteor shower
Dampness calling...shoulders numb
Dancing skies and stars that come
From darkness...volumes...heavens deep
Tails on fire and memories keep
The night alive in pale moonlight
Years of chasing in our sights
Light beams away in solar's keep
While motion lulls our souls to sleep
Giving us a playful chance
To take in heaven's on moondance
Tybee Lighthouse looms her beam
Playing on the soul and seems
To take away the stress of work
To fill the night with endless quirks
When nature moves on high with motion
As tunes of tides wash in from oceans
When nights are sliced with whitened tails
When centuries show of light avails
The eyes to see and ears to open
A gift from skies and endless oceans.

© Susan Katheyn de Vegter


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 Reviews of "Moon Dance"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Dance with the devil in the pale moonlight. Rise with the tides before it's too late.

Ron

Reviewed on January 21, 2008
The Sacrifices we make
to see the swirl that heaven creates!
Love this AWESOME imagery filled Poem Susan
A TREASURE TO SAVOR!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxooo
STay Positive!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Stunning to say the least and the picture compliments your words so lovingly...wish I could have shared that view...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
A beauty Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
...tails of light...become trails of memory...as this pen of dancing stars...ignites appreciation for presents given in the skies.
wonderful Susan...
John

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Ahhhh... this sooo reminds me of Mauritius last October. The night skies were totally amazing... plus the beaches under rugs! :)) But, dang-it... I even missed the Green Flash we all sat down to watch one glorious sunset... An excuse to go back and try again, methinks! A trip to the Outer Hebrides is perhaps, more likely at the moment. How Aurora got to be BOREalis, I shall never know... Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Susan, nothing more beautiful than this poem,which describes the "moondance" to perfection! I've been there and it is all you say!
A free gift that's a priceless treasure!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
exquisite piece..


Vesna

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Bet it was a beauty to watch...especially along the beach...nice pic and great work, Susan...

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
The words of your poem define the meaning of, "Awesome!"
Good work, and highly educational, too. - Bill


Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Thrilling, the display of Heavenly skies at night: being a SkyWatcher, I enjoyed this one! Did you see the moon and Mars nearly touching? It was incredible. Add some sudden streaks of random meteors, I was in my element!! :) Beautiful pen, Susan, saving this to read again and again.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
A beautiful write, outstanding imagery, well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Your poem is a gift to us all. If only many more today realized that the best gifts in life - are free.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
You have so many "great" lines in this piece . . . Heavenly . . .

Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Beautiful write, Susan; brava! The moon is dancing in our night skies as well; and I have seen some incredible meteor showers myself. Always a thrill to witness!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Saving this beauty to read again and again!

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Spectaculars are indeed an event_Within the vastness & variety of this ongoing phenomenon _Evolving universe never sleeps ...{ }...ovvoleel_(Ted)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
a beautiful write-they are awesome in the rocky mountains as well--John denver's, "Rocky Mountain High" was written during a meteor shower

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
"Tybee Lighthouse looms her beam"

I have watched many from atop these carolina hills, but never over the sweet Georgia sea...felt like I had after this beautiful write...Thanks

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
What a delight to read the beautiful imagery your words paint in my old head as if I were there witnessing this wonderful sight.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
i can really relate to your experience ... it's as though i saw it through my eyes ...


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