"You can't always make it home if you never take your foot off of third base."
Rebellions of the soul at times can cause this one to shift
Emotions from a lighter side into a make-do drift
The side of me that causes woe unto the hollow souls
Of those that haven't got the guts to try to grasp the goals
Or bat the spiral of life's paths and swing at best her smiles
Then slide to home with torn up knees and stand to wipe the miles
From skint-up elbows to clayed up seats that sit and rise to run
To round the bases of life's paths and wipe the tears for fun
Then wash away the emptiness and start the path renewed
Retain the scars that dot the heart then act as if they flew
To distant places where life's woes go , somewhere in the deep
The burdens that draw up the past when nightmares walk in sleep
We trace our life in angers grief and smiles that wear a grin
Then keep the faces of the day while scars are kept within
Condition walks when stitched in line and formed then tied in knots
When life is bought and etched in tune to when and where and what
For souls that can and will and do redeem and give new birth
To time spent here...for all its scars...for life and all its worth
I haven't been HERE in so long, I am very sorry Susan~~!
I missed so many of your wonderful sweet blessed writes!
I'm glad I gravitated here today, and will again!
To take risks and keep growing is what LIFE is made for, in my book!Let the memories be made!
You have such a wonderful way of writing Sue! Easy on the eyes and heart!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Warmer Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!Have a Super GREAT Inspirational Day!
You're right, To really appreciate life is to pick ourselves back up after we've been kicked to the ground, brush ourselves off, learn from our pain and move on,In this way we redeem and renew our souls.
The pain and sadness of this this life lets us appreciate our joy so much more than we would without them. Great writing, You inspire me.
It is difficult to live in one place while the heart is elsewhere oftentimes. Like living a paradox, torn apart almost literally. The dictatorship of this continuum is merciless and perpetual. The only escape out of the situation is in dreams. So dream we do with intensity and longing. Thank yu for creating and sharing. Take care,
It really does boil down to the old saying "To thine own self be true..." If we remember this, we will never lose sight of who we are and where we are going, no matter who we include in the ride. Very nice writing, Susan.
Take care,
Sherry
Oh yes ~ seeking & moving under & over _ Slipping & sliding .~. I have had dreams of bunting & still trying to round 3rd .()~Oh the imagination given is indeed boundless ..~..olloveev _ TedSo
Needed this, today - been in a deep blue funk - taking a break from posting here, will continue to read and review - rearranging priorities - beautifully penned inspiration.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Amazing piece of writing here, Susan, it seems I am always saying that. I have been guilty of not grabbing life by its horns and riding for all it was worth . . . Rather, I did grab . . . And I did ride . . . the only thing I grabbed the wrong set of horns and floundered for much of my life . . . I am doing my best to rectify those long ago mistakes during what is lift of my life . . . As always, you give me plenty to ponder . . .
This exceptional book, Celebrating the Gift of Being Alive, has the perfect thoughts and words for birthdays, graduations, engagements, marriages, and any life celebration or family tradition.
I missed so many of your wonderful sweet blessed writes!
I'm glad I gravitated here today, and will again!
To take risks and keep growing is what LIFE is made for, in my book!Let the memories be made!
You have such a wonderful way of writing Sue! Easy on the eyes and heart!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Warmer Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!Have a Super GREAT Inspirational Day!
God bless you. Kathy
The pain and sadness of this this life lets us appreciate our joy so much more than we would without them. Great writing, You inspire me.
Love, Pierre
love this one Susan...
John
Chris
Walt
Take care,
Sherry
People can relate to your way of expressing it.
Ron
new birth, all its worth.. maybe we should call death, after birth...
if we but realize all that is here for us!
Your poems are always a joy to read Susan!
Love,
ET
Needed this, today - been in a deep blue funk - taking a break from posting here, will continue to read and review - rearranging priorities - beautifully penned inspiration.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D