Sweet lonesome Dove
Aimlessly you wobble
For every minute seed
You dart your head and swallow
All my life I've seen the pairs
Always Doves in twos
Little dotted taupe one
Why is there just you?
Doves are pairs of lovers
Cooing with each whisper
Yours, my sweet lonely one
Is a melancholy vesper
Why alone my sweet kind Dove
Why are you "just one"?
You and I have commonness
I'm like you
Alone.
Susan, this brought tears. How touching and hearfelt. The comparison between the lonely dove and you was outstnding and really hit the mark in my heart. Bill
susan, such a lonely write. sounds as if you both are searching. I believe in fairytales, so maybe that dove is the one you're looking for, and visa versa. Very beautiful .
Oh susan...sad poem...tears...but very very well written....BHUWAN
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2003
i sorry for confusion of earlier youre comment on poem of *Never* is what i was talking about also this is a beautiful sad poem no one should ever be alone such sadness :( such a beautiful poem though you have written this so wonderfully excellent job oon it
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well executed
William
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