I know you're here this morning
I feel you all inside me
I hear your heart beating its pace
I can sense but I just cannot see
Sometimes our passions awaken
To the sensitive side of another
There are moments when life is whizzing us by
As we sit with our thoughts that smother
When a mystery of a provocative chance
With a tingle that comes to the surface
And a knot that sits in the back of the throat
As our hearts are clinched and embraced
Its realizing the chance that is wakening
Its swallowing hard that new thirst
Its keeping impulsive reasoning intact
While you sense your passions will bursts
Its knowing the warmth of someone
The fire from the heat of their arms
The smile that breaks into a grin
With security bound with their charm
Its another day for some of us
But a special one for me
A sensing of not being alone
With a spirit alive and free.
To quote my very favorite line would be to rewrite the entire poem.. love is written by us all.. yours speaks, shines, quite profoundly moves my heart.. a pleasure to have read, yes. This one will linger.. god, but I love this one, Susan. katy.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2003
Susan this is breathtakingly beautiful..floria
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2003
Beautiful........
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2003
Good Morning, Susan
A true Loving poem. I think it is beautiful.
Enjoy twists and surprising turns in this erotic collection of sexy love stories based on seven classic fairy tales. There are romantic interludes to touch your heart and plenty of scorching sex to warm your coldest nights.
A true Loving poem. I think it is beautiful.
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tony
Chrissie
Excellent Pen
William