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Trying to write poems
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Trying to write poems,
short verse charms,
or word war storms.
To write or not too write,
maybe do nothing but live in fright.
Trying to express,
put words together in dress.


Sometimes I wonder why,
drop the pen and defy?
Who wants to be under
the spot light,
at times this is no delight.
More or less like self abuse,
oh, what's the freaking use.


Still there's an attraction,
but not much fortune
of satisfaction.
The pie in the sky pros,
many times turn up their nose.
What does this amatuer
think he's doing,
certainly not anything
worth reviewing?


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Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
the curse...we can't live with it we can't live without it...excellent, as always.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
you always succeed in writing good poems, this is no exception ...

Reviewed on March 22, 2005
I love the way you write, it has more depth then airy words and meaningless phrases, You are excellent dear Grady!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
Yes Karen is so right about this one and you sure have a lot of talent going for you. Yes he is top dog.

Reviewed on March 22, 2005
grady, as long as your muse is active, you shall write. i love the way you write, you write with such feeling and conviction, and your writing touches people. i know it touches me, and i consider you one of my favorites here at the den! don't ever doubt your capabilitis as a writer; i happen to think you are top dog! excellent write; well done, my friend! bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
Hi Grady, I'm doing fine. Your poem expresses my feeling exactly. It's next to impossibe to become an established author. I'm working on my third book, but I don't have any high hopes. The thing is not to write for approval or reward. Write because you love doing it and because it comes from your soul. Happy Easter.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
Grady
there is always something to write about
I do about my dry spells
at times when i think the ink of my plume is drying
I write about it and it works it's own kinks out
less parking tickets and more writing.....lol.. long lost jargon
10/4?

William .....peace

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
I agree with Sue :-) Being a writer can be frustrating, can't it? Great capture of this part of writing.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
grady you are always worth reviewing. and this is no exception


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