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by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Critique is apart of life especially poetry and writing. But I try to discourage stupidity and I try not to be stupid myself. Sometimes I fail,
but I don't dome myself too hell.
I brush myself off and go on with life.
The incident in this poem occured around the time I first started writing,
thought I would share it, I wasn't as mature as I am now...............


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Some don't critique,
they go stupid.
Like we don't know,
that they hate our show.
But this is ok,
it won't stop my play,
or mess up my day.


It's the stupid that's hard too take,
not a critic that is disguise fake.
I hate stupid,
just like I hate fools.
Even stupid in myself,
I got my problems too.


When it comes to stupid,
AD is closer to cupid.
It really isn't that bad,
some of the other poetic sites
will make you more sad.
I was ran off another site,
because a fool came too fight.
He started it by being an azz hole,
the full azz in whole.
Come to find out,
he worked the same route.
He and the owner were friends,
the owner backed his stupid trends.


I zapped on them both quick,
with my f you brick.
I don't need this chit,
so I did quit.
Haven't looked back,
on their stupid attack


But it took it's toll,
kind of rocked my soul.
It wasn't all their stupid,
it was how far
I dropped from cupid.
I went nuclear bomb,
buried the fools in a tomb.
Zapped clean the freak out,
traveled a real stupid route.


This one fools past time
was painting his nails.
What's a man doing
painting his nails?
Sounds strange to me!
Thought his poetry was the bomb,
reading it made me want too succumb.
But I bit my tongue,
tipped lightly amoung.
Still got no respect.


The best thing I did,
was get on my slid.
No way was I going to
keep paying my money,
to some fools
blocking my day sunny.


I came back to AD,
didn't mind paying my fee.


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 Reviews of "Bad Reviews"
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
Believe in you Always
Neve
Give up!
This was definitly an Interesting
Write!
I dont' mind paying my fee either, but in my opinion
Because we pay monthly, I believe there shouldn't be censorizing!
Adult view, they usually ask anyway before you get to see and NOW NONE is allowed, all writings are inspirational to me! And we pay mnthly! is my gripe!Some sites don't even charge!
WArmest Blessings!
Warm HuGs,Sheee

Reviewed on November 26, 2006
If you express too much they would call it whining and tell you to grow up. These are pranksters. Ignore them!

The worst news is that you are being attacked by the site's owner and their friends for reasons unknown...

People should take caution of what they say to an author who, only in his/her rightful place, expresses himself/herself.

I'm glad you have left that site.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
I remember this one and it is true. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
The only waay to learn for me is ....to listen and learn or listen but ignore...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
Hi Guy, you sound like many other's; it always hurts when your work is ripped apart. I'm glad you never gave up, nor quite. I agree with Victor, just ignore it.God Bless, Holly

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
You will always find people who can't write themselves and yet downgrade your writing as best as they could. Just ignore them. Personally I don't mind constructive criticism. I would also be prepared for suggestions on anything I write, that is improvement. Alas here on AD no one criticises. If one doesn't like you or your poem, you are just passed up, ignored completely. And if you dare say anything....least said soon mended. If one likes you, you get some comment that in fact means nothing. Others give praise where praise is due. But never suggestions. It seems everyone is too busy writing and tring to post and have no time for constructive criticism. Pity, but you can't have everything in this world. Victor


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