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1- Reviewer Retreat
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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The dominos are falling!


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In this field of wheat
I guess I can still eat.
I had one viewer to retreat,
I passed her on the street.
Man did she look sweet,
made my life complete.

Anyway the dominos are falling,
I can hear Jesus calling.
Forgive their trespasses,
it's alright to kiss their azzes.
Share your tissues,
we all have issues.

Thank you Lord for the sage,
cause I feel like a monkey in a cage,
of course I can handle my rage.
I might be like a big gorilla,
but I find verse a thrilla.
It calms the beast,
when he desires to feast.

OnepoetGem

 

 


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 Reviews of "1- Reviewer Retreat"
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Yeah. Writing verse is a "thrilla" and it sure comes in handy when you're in need of calming down. ;)

Connie

Reviewed on May 3, 2008
And it's great to see someone express themselves so honestly in their poems as you do. Kudos, OpG!
Blessings ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 3, 2008
Loved the last stanza, good one....

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 3, 2008
I enjoyed this, have a good one!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 3, 2008
Cute one, G...e


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