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Ton of Bricks
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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A fictional poem expressing love in weight.


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Wow this love has
hit me like a ton of bricks.
I need therapy
and no phony tricks.
I can't call on Zeus,
he was a God of abuse.
Love back then wasn't logical,
it was mostly mythological.
Here in the future I'm with,
I can't survive on myth.

Maybe I can take it up
with my love of desire,
the one setting my
heart and soul on fire.
I love her so,
all I can hope is
that she know.

Hello my sweet,
I'm guilty of
loving you complete.
You have knocked me
completely off my feet.
I've surely had to
take a firm sweet.
My legs are shaking,
but my hearts not breaking,
of this there is no mistaking.
The weight of a ton usually hurts,
however this weight only flirts.

 

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 Reviews of "Ton of Bricks"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 28, 2008
enjoyed this--love can certainly be weighty!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
Love is the cement that holds those bricks together. Splendid write.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
What a sweetheart you are my friend! Enjoyed this much...truly from the heart!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
How sweetly you write of love my dear.....the weight of lovebears no mass.


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