Writing verse will attract all type eyes, even paranoid eyes.
It shouldn't surprise
all the paranoid eyes
There are so many
with issues
we should hand out tissues
So when they read
our verse
they can wipe their
weeping eyes curse
Don't write anything
or be brave and write everything
Leave your page blank
If you write
your ship may sank
The serious paranoid
will not flavored
They'll analyze every
word, sentence and statement
lash out in resentment
Even your friends will
throw their two cent in
especially in the den
No
make that one dollar
they'll scream and holler
try to snatch you In your collar
I value the critique input
but if you're paranoid
watchout for my output
OnepoetGem
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Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
Ah, true, Grady. From the writer's POV, we post to entertain (mostly) and there will sometimes be those who will have issues with what we post. But these are THEIR issues, not ours ... and we will allow the paranoia to remain in THEIR court, not ours. We may always delete their comment (during my sojourn on AD, I have only had to do this once). Write on!
Gotta love those paranoid-eyes you made! Reminds me of the looks we got from a meth-lab idiot when we responded to a fire alarm!!! Yep, it was a good bust :-)
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Gotta love those paranoid-eyes you made! Reminds me of the looks we got from a meth-lab idiot when we responded to a fire alarm!!! Yep, it was a good bust :-)
Ted
In Christs Love
Michelle~