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by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Just one look, that's all it took, then God realized man needed the bible book. Man gets on his knees and prays, for his sinful ways.


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The angels and God look down
what they see will make a
face frown
Man looks up to the sky
then wonders why
He'll do this until
the day he die

Viewing from above
the angels and God
realizes that man needs love
But you can lead a horse
to water
 you can't make him drink
God provided the brain
man has to think

Looking up from the ground
man wonders if he's alone
Many men possess
a heart of stone
They figure that God
doesn't exist or is long gone

The cycle continues on
Man views up
and God views down
Who's for real and
who's the clown
Certainly not God
even though he created
us from sod

opg


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 Reviews of "The Reviewers"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 1, 2009
wow--so much to this write-i enjoyed you wisdom--and your hints to think!!!

Reviewed on March 1, 2009
Ah, Grady...much food for thought in your words! Well stated, my friend...
Blessings - Micke

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on February 28, 2009
(God) Threw Out The ROPE Either You As I Hang On To It Or Simply You Hang Yourself In The (Lasso) Loop...

299% Of You Read This Will Do Exactly That:

Hang Yourselves In The Loop...

TRASK...

Reviewed on February 28, 2009
OPG,

Very beautiful and inspirational write. Sometimes we don't realize what we really have.

Mary

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 28, 2009
Substance for reflection, my friend. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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