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Love Gets Better
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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I haven't seen many love stories get better. After ten years a friend and her husband brokes up because of another woman.


Poem Artwork

Versing this title
might make a poet
turn a little idle
Love should get better
depending on the
babysitter
and if he or she
isn't a quitter

I wasn't a quitter
but love has been
a hard hitter
Love has various parts
each one entices hearts
The beginning is where
all love starts

Physical love starts out
very strong
it highlights mental love
until the end of the song
Many remain dedicated
while physical love last
Once it goes so does
loves blast
The love story might start
over with a new cast
Some loves get better
others don't last

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 Reviews of "Love Gets Better"
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 10, 2009
Love Is MYTH,i.e.True Love Is Compassion...

If Compassion Were Shown Marriage Last Lifetime...Somehow Sex Always Gets In Out Of Big Picture...

TRASK...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2009
So sad sweet sweet man...hope your feeling better when I get a chance I will drop you a line..stay safe and well and stay off those legs...Hugssssssss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxo

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2009
Some truth in this writing. Hopefully Love will grow deeper and stronger with time!

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 10, 2009
That is a very sad story, it should get better not worse

Reviewed on March 10, 2009


Oh One sorry to hear of your friends break up.
Enjoyed reading your "Love Gets Better" true you have to hold on sometimes (most people can't) either.
As they say taking the good with the bad, bitter with the sweet you know.

Wonderful and yet sad penning not to mention it can be a bit frightening when someone we know splits...too close for comfort. In a sense can make one hold on a little tighter too. If not tighter check themselves and make sure they are doing their best.

Smile and take care,
Gwendolyn



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