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Ratted Out
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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It's might be best not to tell anyone your secrets or what is really bothering you.


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Nothing worse than a rat
makes no difference
where you're at
Some will take a bat
to a rat
It's best to keep deep
dark secrets inside
Don't even try to confide
unless you want to experience
the slip and slide
or be taken on a jungle ride

Sometimes emotions run high
we're only human this is why
It can get so bad some cry
We might need someone to
talk to
especially after circumstances
drive us sad and blue
What's a person to do

Watchout with this verse
it has a ratting curse
and it can get worse
If you're not too careful in
what you write
you can rat yourself out
right on your own site
Wrong or right others
might not understand
then make a fist out of
a hand
Knocking you
clean the unk out
then things will really
become a twist and shout
Should have maybe went the
quiet route

opg

 


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 Reviews of "Ratted Out"
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 24, 2009
Rats Are Cleaner Than Cats,i.e. Rats Follow Set Pattern...

TRASK

Reviewed on November 24, 2009
Ratttaattat you are rat, but you're lucky, I them better than humans.
Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 24, 2009
Once again you offer good advice via your verses, Grady. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on November 24, 2009
Aint' this just a fine crazy funny poem? well yes of course it is.
well written great scanning/


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