Intricate the white larkspur near the light blue,
wafed in a gentle breeze
A dragonfly quick of flight..a humming bird
sipping nectar from a vibrant stargazer lily
Bullfrog, ribbits..lily pads and blossoms waver
as the bullfrog disappears
A tri-color beech tree in beautiful array of its
summer colored leaves..swaying to the gentle breeze..
crickets, doves cooing, the piercing locust ..tell
of summers stories
I call, are you here? Walking the grounds I peer
into the summer house windows..all is quiet...
then I see him
Sweet man of my life..you smile..white heart flame
burning beneath the blue steeples of the larkspur,
my Lady Angel..to bow to your lovliness
Arm in arm..approaching the summer house
the screen door creaks..
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Larkspur In Love/Mary Ann Biddinger
July 20, 2011 (c)
Mary Ann, please don't take this wrong, but this would be a fantastic setup for a Viagra commercial. It's so well done and so sensual, then it leaves it all to your imagination. "... the screen door creaks" fantastic imagery.
I have only one complaint.... That fine print is really hard on an old mans eyes.
THIS WORK, AS ALL OF YOUR SHARINGS ARE, IS FILLED WITH BEAUTIFUL AND VIVID IMAGERY...A LOVELY PIECE OF ART. THANK YOU. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Lovely sweet spirit ... reminiscent (in certain aspects) to me of Walden Pond. You seem to deepen your gift each time I read you. Peace and continued inspiration to you ... richard
The words you weave in this poetic offering are written with a golden thread, interlaced with happiness and light. Truly a lovely poem, Mary Ann, comlete with lyrical abundance.
There is a splendid romantic feel to this and a sense of peace ~
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2011
Love the creaking screen door, adds a sort of closure on everything. Beautifully constructed words of nature all around each of us on a daily basis, which a great majority, myself included, of us fail to see the depths of its beauty.
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
Edward Rutherford is prepared to do just about anything to escape an arranged marriage to a woman he despises. But his brilliant plan to feign insanity has some rather unwanted consequences...
I have only one complaint.... That fine print is really hard on an old mans eyes.
Thanks Dick
back to some happy memories.
peace & blessings,
carolyn
burning beneath the blue steeples of the larkspur,"
Very nice lines Mary Ann. Glad to become aware of you on this site.
My Best
Regis
of quiet bliss and your words reflect
peace and harmony. Mary Ann, this is delight
for senses and soul.
John
Christine
Joy L. Hale
Hugs,
Anna
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Blessings,
Christine
Peace
Tony
~Lady Mary Ann~
as love waves to the flowing summer breezes
depicting lovely essence from your picture
Lady Vivian