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Tender Promises
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*~ Tender Promises ~* *A pleasant walk along the shore* *Mist of warm morning rain* *I walk alone under my Red umbrella,* *Something told me today, to take the Red* *My thoughts wavering in wonder* *Hi ! may I walk with you under your* *Red umbrella..I stared at him..* *My manners I all but lost..* *Hell-o, why yes, it would be nice* *My umbrella is large enough for two* *I haven't seen you for a while* *I know, just wasn't the right time* *Awaiting a rainbow, you know* *A tender romantic kiss under* *The shade of scarlet red* *Seeking each others eyes,* *Deepening the hazel, a wink,* *Emmerce a tender moment* *To their tender promise* *A picture this day of hearts* *Carasmatic ventures in the* *Warm August mist, a rainbow* *Of seven colours, promise* *A promise to each other* *Ever and a day ~ hearts love* *He is holding the red umbrella* *Steady his strong arm* *Tender promises engaged* *Entwined hands, we gaze as* *Colours unfurl into the mist* *Of the warm August rain* *A tender romantic kiss ~* *Beneath the Scarlet Red* Tender Promises ~ Mary Ann Biddinger (c) August 19, 2011

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 28, 2012

Lovely and romantic, treasured experience well-shared. Thank you, Mary Ann. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on January 24, 2012

NICELY DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on October 18, 2011

beautifully romantic write
hug
Kat

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on September 30, 2011

Stunning romance, so beautifully penned Mary Ann. Just lovely.

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on September 12, 2011

perfection of romance.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on September 1, 2011

A romantic walk beneath that red umbrella with lovely images! ~Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by George Dominguez

Reviewed on August 30, 2011

VERY ROMANTIC AND SO FILL WITH PASSION FROM THE HEART lADY MARY ANN. GOD BLESS. GEORGE AKA THE WISE OLD OWL

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2011

A BEAUTIFUL WRITE,,,AND I THINK WE SHOULD ALL BUY A RED UMBRELLA.
KEEP GOING MY FRIEND,,ANNA

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 23, 2011

Sensual, romantic, and filled with all the love that rests within your heart...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Beverly Cranford (Reader)

Thank you Mary Ann for your poem here ...'Tender Promises.' For me, it portrays ageless love, found at the end of summer on a dismal day at the ocean. You write of bright objects that change the emotions
of your characters and the story quickly turns to romance. You write
with a pureness!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 22, 2011

Mary Ann, This is vivid in tenderness and warmth..romance dances neath the red~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

The imagery is delicate and lucid: the red umbrella, the rainbow, the romantic kiss, all develop a tenderly wrought scene that could be the springboard for a Hallmark movie. Charismatic indeed Lady Mary Ann! Enjoyed ... richard

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Lovely, Mary Ann! Loved the premise of romance beneath that red umbrella! Thanks for sharing!

Anna

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on August 20, 2011

Nice! Mary Ann

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Seeing red, but Only through tender moments is such
a lovely piece from such a Sweetie,
we know as Lady Mary Ann, from her own loving heart !!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Beautifully written poetry as the picture is so lovely a great write as always Laura

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Pure loveliness, under the red protection.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Sweet and lyrical reflection, Mary Ann ~
I'm sad summer is ending, not ready for the hustle and bustle of fall yet!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan

With someone you trust and love
all sharing is possible and wished for;
tender writing, Mary Ann, with fine touch
and understanding.

John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Nice tender moments coming from beneath the red umbrella. Sweet.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Carasmatic ventures in the warm August mist - a lovely poem and pic, Mary Ann.