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Body Ink
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Wishing I had more body ink.

Body Ink The bar was lowdown and dirty Shells scattered over the floor .38s, .45s, and a few 9mms Danger lurked behind the door. Felt a hand on my shoulder She smiled a thin crooked smile Derringer in a little ankle holster Held my attention for a while. Followed her lead to the bar Double shot of Jack to her lips Hubbard on the jukebox My hands tight on her hips. We danced hard to The Clash And then slow to Bonnie Raitt When she whispered “Take me home” I didn’t even hesitate. Slowly undressing in the dim light Her beautiful body covered in ink Gradually turning for me to read Her naked story, and gave me a wink. Placed her gun on the nightstand With her holster she tied my hands She, a cowgirl riding through the night I gave in to all her commands. Still reading the ink on her body In the bright next morning sun The smell of her sex around us On her long beautiful leg was her gun. Danger she held between her legs And passion she had in her heart I don’t want to play with her gun I just love reading her art. 2010 © Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed by dawn You'll never know

Reviewed on June 8, 2013

I love how you tell this story of danger mixed with excitement and passion.

-Dawn-

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on June 5, 2010

Very entertaining David. Good thing you're not dislexic. Patrick

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on June 3, 2010

Wow....well done !

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

passionate!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

You are a true art lover, indeed!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

You have an incredible style!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 2, 2010

Dayvid, I loved your wild adventurous poem..It made me excited to read something so well done! Gotta watch out for those guns...lol

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Okay, that would be scary. I'm sure she did have danger between her legs, though.
Fabulous, entertaining ride, this one!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

I always wanted either a peace sign or a grateful dead face, but my fiance does NOT like tatoo's (sp?) or if you will body art...Ed

Reviewed by Donna Chandler

SEXY. I like it. Well done.

Donna

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Tattooed on Heaven's soft cloud, Dayvid! What a place to lay your head! I like this style...it's all a matter of visual props leading to the erotic...indelible pigment under three layers of bare skin and this poetry stays put! Tigers, snakes, eagles and crosses!

Love and Sexy Tats,
Sage