I Feel Her (poem) by Dayvid Graybill on AuthorsDen

I Feel Her
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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ONE In the quiet restaurant she smiles at me across the table, playing with the flame. Confidence flows through the nervousness of her insecurity. I feel her reaching deep inside me touching my open heart. TWO In our living room she sits with me on the leather sofa, sipping wine from a glass. Silence softly slips between the notes of our musical love. I feel her reaching deep inside me touching my open heart. THREE Under the full moon she breathes beside me in the hammock, in our back yard. She whispers seductively, “Talk dirty to me.” Sexy words flow. I feel her reaching inside touching, touching. FOUR Warm, morning sun on the deck she glances at me from her chair, coffee in her hand. Quietly sharing daydreams sliding between joys and sadness. I feel her reaching deep inside me touching my open heart. 2014 © Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on September 16, 2014

this is so very romantic and sensual. I adore this type of poetry that is shared. Gives me a warm feeling inside.

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Michael True

Reviewed on September 11, 2014

I can also appreciate your use of style, the formatting of the poetry, the emotion in the meter. I sense a lifetime of coloring outside of the lines. M.True

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe

Reviewed on September 9, 2014

Beautiful.

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on August 20, 2014

...what wine was it?
Nicely done!

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2014

Love happens and changes your life for the better.

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on July 27, 2014

With feeling such as those, you can rest assured your life will be as one with happiness.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 25, 2014

Good thought-provoking write! I love the sensivity of it.

Sandie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Welcome back. So secret and seductive. Makes the reader a voyeur into a love affair.

Ron

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

This is softly seductive. I love it!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on July 24, 2014

FIVE

I give this poem FIVE stars!

Well done David!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

David,
One of your very best! You had me, I wanted this poem to go on and on...
Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by E Phillips

With FOUR parts I was prepared to be disappointed.
But you came through with flying colors!
Very tender and romantic, Dayvid. Well done.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Sensually engaging; you have recalled and shared the experience effectively through your verses here, Dayvid. Thank you. Love, peace, and blessings,

Regis