Touch and Surround (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Pia Shannon

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

exquisite - language of the senses

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on December 25, 2004

Wonderful words, perfect composition.
Great !

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on December 20, 2004

Exquisite verse, Anita..Happy holidays..best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

(((lady a)))

i almost missed this stunning piece of beauty--i'm glad i stopped by when i did! absolutely mesmerizing and powerfully penned--BRAVA!

my wish for you this Christmas is that it is surrounded by love, hope and family :) and above all, peace

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Simply a beautiful creation all around, Anita. Thank you for sharing this gentle offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

super nice and a joy to read. G

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Short and penetrating. Straight to the heart.

Ron

Reviewed by Randal Files (Reader)

Reviewed on December 14, 2004

You speak to the heart in ways very few can. What a beautiful poem.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Lady A,

Short; succinct; divine - all wrapped up in a beautiful pic, title, and exquisite verse!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Your poem speaks and sings very well - to the heart.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Mmm-Mmm - melting... just melting... from the silken picture to the closing line, I have just had the full treatment, the works; there's a glow that is working its way from core to circumference and I FEEL GOOD after this!! Touch and surround... yup, that just about does it. Forget champagne and jacuzzis... just bring on d Lady A. More delicate than contraband silk stockings in WW2 France, my dear! Luv this and - oh yeah - am keeping!!! :))))) K xx

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Ohh so beautiful! :)

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Lady, this is simply beautiful. It reminds me of Ben Jonson's work. Outstanding composition.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Oh how much I loved this poem, this was just beautiful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

an amazing write

William ....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

love it!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Anita,

This is absolutely beautiful!! My kind of poetry.

Jack

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Is that speak to your lips in tounges.

This is a masterful poem, my lady..

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

I have not read your work in a while and I am the loser. This is outstanding! I really am an admirer of your work and I promise that the moment I have a block of time on my hands, I will be perusing your den for more of these gems. Well done!
Chanti

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Lady A, I must echo everyone�s sentiments, and add that I believe, a gentle touch will more than likely erase most pain, allowing the body and soul to blend into one with someone you care for deeply, so as to enjoy the bliss as two become one. A magnificent well-penned composition. Thank you for sharing it. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Simply put and very beautiful just like the flower in the picture.

Reviewed by A. Gagn� (Reader)

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Gorgeous. Simply gorgeous all around.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Good poetry Anita!!

Love Tinak

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Excellent poetry. The theme is developed perfectly and beautifully enhanced by your imagery.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Nothing like a subtle invitation to start the day off, 'eh? You say so much in so few a words. It'd have taken me a page and a half to do this and I still wouldn't have had the impact this had. Good. Very good.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Another breath-taking beauty, Lady A. This is so smooth and gentle it was like silken lotion smoothed into dry thirsty skin...it brought a sigh of joy. Wonderful images embrace your verses. My highest praises on this one, Anita...Take a well deserved bow.(can you hear me applauding?) Into my library this shall go.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Beautiful description of the many ways to love or communicate. R

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

One of the best this Ducks ever read.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

a wonderfully warm and beautiful poem that touches and surrounds the beauty within ...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Lovely, Anita. I agree with Eileen, touch is important to showing love and also key to healing.