Sometimes my mind wanders to odd places.... One day I was thinking about bullies, and how they can appear bigger than life when they are on the offensive. And just what if........they could be shrunken down to size...and made to feel vulnerable and small. Sized by their mind, and crimes. Sized by design. And learn what its like when the shoe is on the other foot.
Carpet-tall Pun-ishment
A perilous life is found indeed For those who live, a life unseen Above the wood, beneath the sole Annihilated on the stroll
In fibered forests penalized The meanest live now brutalized In short their deeds now mark their size Their tirades lost along with cries!
And how this sentence came to be On those abusers of the wee Tormenting bullies and their hordes Squished beneath the shoe and board?
If I could only swear for sure The fate of shrunken tormentors I do believe them judged and done For hurting others.....as THEIR fun
A size adjusted to their minds Of particles to small to find 'Neath carpet fibers....or on wood A different view now understood
Where gentle minds were branded weak Where silence met with mocked critique Where faith and virtue held no worth Dismissed as tho.....the scum of earth
Appointed judge and juries see The executioner's decree The final fate on those that press The gentle towards a new address
And in the end, it's they that give Themselves a prision, which to live In peril shadow.....of the shoe Such evil learns.......a different view
Pax A 4/15/06
Not so nice when the shoe is on the other foot!
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Reviews of "CARPET-TALL PUN--ISHMENT - An Anti Bully Write"
Uniquely branded with the BIG PAX-mark, this is both compassionate and "in your eye"-stuff, Anita. And told in a way that young'uns, in particular, can probably identify with... speakin of which, in Christian circles, have you seen the T-shirts sporting the Nike trade-mark of the tick... but with the words: "Nice - just be it" instead of the "just do it"-thing... neat eh?? Like this totally coooooooool write! :)) TY Kate xx
You express some important points very effectively in your verses, Anita. I also appreciate the form of the poem which indicates discipline and thought. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Bullies are those who believe that they can piss into the wind and not have it hit them in the face. Great write, Anita!
Then their size would match their puny self-esteem, which I suspect is the source which feeds their tyranny-victimizing the weak to make them feel strong. Fantastic peice, Anita!
Pax you are brilliant and so darn creative! This is fabulous work and I hate bullies, so this is a keeper and one of the best I've seen on the topic! Thank you Anita!
Anita
You sum up perfectly the fate of the boasting bully
When the boot is on the other foot, those bullies don't have the bottle to take it...
Or as Harry Trueman used to say " If you can't stand the heat, stay out of the kitchen "...
Gotta love it
Peter
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Gina
I love this one!
Regis
Love & Light,
Joseph
An excellent, thought provoking write; as one who has been bullied, I felt this one, deeply. Thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Lin
Love,
eT
A good thought-provoking piece!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
You sum up perfectly the fate of the boasting bully
When the boot is on the other foot, those bullies don't have the bottle to take it...
Or as Harry Trueman used to say " If you can't stand the heat, stay out of the kitchen "...
Gotta love it
Peter