Temporarily Always (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

P-E-R-F-E-C-T-I-O-N ... if this isn't published I shall want to know why not... An absolute FLAGSHIP of your work, Anita, this is a prime example of your uniqueness of perception and artistic skill. Totally adore it and so wish I wrote it... but, sadly, tis you and not me! No way could I have done this. It is allllllllll yours, Darlin, and, like Brighton Rock, has LADY A stamped all the way through it to its core. Am keeping for certain sure. LOL K xx

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

Dear Anita,

You truly know how to wrap words in beauty. I love your rhythm and rhyme.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

Beautiful, Lady A!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

On the loop of always
Starts another dance!
Such right time of waking
Therein lights your chance

Keep on Dancin, Queenie - and yet another great quote!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

Beautiful poetry my friend. : )

Jack

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

My fish always get eaten by my bait...
Every minute is precious, we should not take anything or anyone for granted, make the most of it while we may.....

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Sagacious and enchanting, APax. Beautifully expressed.
Peace,
CArolyn

Reviewed by Elizabeth Brunson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

well done!!

Liz

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Wonderful!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

WHat a wonderful capitivating piece!!

Well done Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

What an enchanting beautiful poem this is APax! Full of wisdom
too;-)!Your work flows with such ease it's a joy to read!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Anita,

A capitivating piece. "I've no claim to shadows..." Wonderful perception. There are so many excellent lines, I must go read again.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Anita

An in depth and itrospective look at life through the lens of nature
and the perceptory senses..

This exceptional pen warrants more than one read, as there is so much latent and vibrant wisdom and perception, hidden between the lines..

A cryptic masterpiece..:)

Your muse has certainly deepened and expanded in elaborate and complex
dimensions of insight..

The contemporary graphic is spritually awakening..

Love and Harmony

Peter

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Dear Anita ...
This is so beautifully penned and insightful.

No matter what, time continues to relentlessly flow forward and each moment is precious and worth the savoring. What a lovely gem this is!

In friendship and respect ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg