Seeing through the pedestrian or obvious, is a unique ability. And so much can be missed out on, when just seeing the surface of situations. But looking, feeling and believing in the beyond, opens up new dimensions. Whoda Thunk, huh?......Pax A
Built From Pines Of Pageantry
On the sea of rippled wishes Rocking gently for the eye With the sailing scent of petals 'Neath a gently painted sky
Came a vessel like no other Made of dreams, and destinies Brimmed a cargo filled with promise Built from pines, of pageantry
Voyage on the salty waters Voyage on the fresh and brine Dropping anchor in the harbors Where a fertile heart reclines
There to leave a wealth of treasures In the hands of those who care All who meet the ship in harbor Wear the aura of the rare
Minds that see a petaled freshness Not the masts of fabric sewn Are the reasons for the voyage And the breezes softly blown
Anita, you are an incredibly gifted poetess...and incredibly gifted
soul.
Thank you for sharing, what you have been so freely, given!
Love&Blessings, Rhonda
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2006
Each stanza could stand alone here...I seriously could take a cruise on the boat made from Pines of Pageantry...'came a vessel like no other, Made of dreams and destinies Brimmed a cargo filled with promise'...you have an amazing way of connecting heart and soul. Truly magical work! Panda :)
Totally delicious and yes, can see it, scents it, feel it in ways that only you can bring to mind. This is totally hip-with-it poetry... but, mind you, so is your BS jobby on your biog page... You are just sooooooooooo bloody versatile, Anita... poetry just sweats... sorry, glows... outa your pores.... I am away with the Sugar Plum Fairies with this one... LOL K xx
I stand hopefully at my little unassuming harbour waiting for this fragrant boat to dock and offload some of its cargo of promise sufficient for me. Enchanting beauty shimmering magically!
This is a work of art. It can be applied to so many areas in each of our lives. Look for the beauty, look for the love, look for the gold at the end of the rainbow and you will surely find it.
By the way, that is a beautiful picture.
God Bless,
Lew
There is so much more to be experienced in life if we just open our senses to the possibilities and allow our dreams and imaginings to manifest. Why see purple when we can see indigo-pink? This is amazing work, I really love this poem, as I do all of your writings.
Take care,
Sherry
You are a visionary with telepathic understanding and empathy..
We are only just scratching the surface with our five senses...it is when we use our sixth sense, that we see into the magical and enchanting Fourth Dimension..
GLIMPSE OF AN ANGEL IS NOW AVAILABLE. A PORTION OF ALL SALES WILL GO TO HOSPICE TO THUS ENABLE THEM TO HELP OTHERS WHO ARE SOON TO PASS TO THE OTHER SIDE. NO LONGER AVAILABLE.
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Thank you for sharing, what you have been so freely, given!
Love&Blessings, Rhonda
Of course I am in love
I am in love with POETRY!!!!
And aren't we all!
muuhaaahaaa
otherwise, why do all this?????
By the way, that is a beautiful picture.
God Bless,
Lew
Love Tinky
Maybe next year, that ship for our summer ghost cruise!
Joselyn
Fee
You are a genius with words, girl.
Elizabeth
Take care,
Sherry
You are a visionary with telepathic understanding and empathy..
We are only just scratching the surface with our five senses...it is when we use our sixth sense, that we see into the magical and enchanting Fourth Dimension..
Fabolous work from your gifted pen..
Peter