Silent Witness By Felix Perry & A Pax (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Unique, as the two of you...deep, as your ink wells.

Altogether lovely!
Love, Rhonda

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Tis' a fine collaboration you two, we all knew it was fiction lol, it's a beautiful image laden tranquil romance. I'm all squishy now.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Oh this is exquisite...the imagery, emotion and meter are perfect. I really was swept away. Bravo to the pair of you...great collaboration. Panda :)

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Much of our poetry is a work of fiction, however this is a declaration of love for someone. Let the reader dwell within his own heart. I loved it.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Just a note to say this has been one of my favorite collaborations and one I will treasure. Anita and I have become great friends and as she said this is just a work of fiction I look forward to doing other collaborations with her in future. She is one fine lady.

Felix

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Wonderful!! ~~~~APPLAUSE~~~~~You two, being close friends first, were meant to meet and open the den to love.It has always been awesome when two hearts who beat apart...come together.I love every word!
Love and peace to you both!
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Great collabotaion you two!!

The biker and the cookie Queen..........what more can you ask for!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

A most remarkable pairing... felt like the two of your were reined together in tandem, pulling a delightful springy gig of love behind you, trotting with all the poetic daintiness which would befit an 18th century costume drama... Sorry, no telling how my mind works sometimes!! :)) Or, put another way, could tell somehow that this was Fee's type of galleon but DEFINTELY with the sulty Lady A at the front as finely-crafted figurehead!! Delightful, thank you both. K xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

The question we all ask. Most tranquil indeed..

Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

such a lovely collabtion.both beauty in texture and depth!!!

bom bhole!
roshan

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Well that was collaboration at its best. The poem flows so much that its hard to distinguish who wrote which. Victor

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

A splendid collab that's as one voice as you can get! Beautifully written yearning love poem!...ET

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Well done guys

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

An incredibly lovely read...great job guys! Michelle

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

The Silent Witness is the North Star :)

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Moments weigh as deep as years
Burdened is the lonely soul
Two as one divided wait
For the touch, caressed as whole

Is this the object of the silent witness? United but divided, until that certain touch breaches that division.
This poem is a delicate fabric with a pattern that teases one's discernment capacity to the hilt. Love separated by a veil, distance, a wall,what will the dawn bring that may or may not entwine the arms of love at last? Who or what is the silent witness that bears the answers?
Enigmatic write Felix and Anita.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Very beautiful and evocative.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Bravo you two this is beautiful and a wonderful duet.............