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UPWARD HAS A SWEETER VIEW
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“It is not the mountain we conquer but ourselves.” ~E Hillary

 

UPWARD HAS A SWEETER VIEW
 
Granted  by such privilege
We are mortals of free will
Upon our explorations
Come choices now fulfilled
 
And here upon my half mark
When daring I look back
Upon years of  my passings(almost 53)
I now see thru the cracks
 
Cracks caused by the burdens
I chose, yet I deny
Between them, back bent sumptered
Here from their split, I spy
 
I spy the possibilities
Advantages and lack
To see life through, a focused view
As upward, outsteps back
 
Upward has a sweeter view
With shadows fading bright
For this dull mortal on life's hill
I'll age to brighter lights
 
I hope!
 
Pax
A
9/15/07

 

Oh that's it!!!
I am not fading, the white hair means nothing!
I am brightening!
Muuhaahaaa
 

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Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2007
Anita this is a glorious look at the halfway mark in life. -an excellent poem with great meter and rhyme (as usual) The picture is sumptuous! A perfect combination.
~Butch Howard

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Great reflection! Positive thoughts bring positive things, and most climbs bring with them amazing views! Enjoyed, ty. Panda :)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
beautiful writing!

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Life places us within the reflections of past and yet there is the thought of where we are and where we will be...


destiny is inevitable.....



nice enjoyable poem.....




Art Sun...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
In my heart you will always be a bright beacon of light when I read and reread these brilliant writes of hope.
hugs

Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
When the white/gray start to show.....it's the only time I see that silver lining!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
So very inspirational - look upward and forward, don't repeat the same mistakes.
I plan on plagerizing your line about the white hair - "I'm brightening!" Perhaps, my Mom will let her hair go white, instead of being so 'dull.'

Kathy

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
yep, always look at the bright side, at least it's turning white and not gray ;) keep climbing ...

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Oh the poetry of life penned so beautifully.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
What a wonderful write! Enjoyed this much...I love the comment about the white hair, I have often had people ask me why I didn't dye the white steak in my hair? I always replied that God intended it this way, and it is a sign of wisdom due to the trials of life that I have overcome! I am often greeted with a strange and curious expression. Ironically I am also often ask, who does my hair...I also reply that good Lord is my hair dresser, again I am greeted with a peculiar expression! I am who I am...enjoyed the thoughts behind and within this write. Enjoyed my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
53 years old? What a magical number Anita, the sum total being 8, which is a spiritual number for new beginnings. And the positive and tentative mix you create in this poem shows the writer as being very human, and very in touch with her desires and mortality. This is a winner, as you are dear friend.
Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Mmmmmmmmmmmmm...yes, it does. Love the thoughts behind this: I thank you, my silvering locks thank you LOL Beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by William Haynes
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
I wish I still had even hair of white
nice thoughts
bill

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Hey, I got lots of white hair now, and I hope it brought a little wisdom as it came, and at least, I still got hair!

Love, the poem and the pic, Queenie, and that is one hell of a quote!

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Wonderful write. If God does not move mountains it is not because of your lack of faith. It is because he wants you to know the wonderful joy of climbing it.
God Bless,
Lew


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