SCHIZO ISLAND (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 1, 2003

This poem totally made my evening. Now I can sleep well, knowing that I am not the only one. Love it with all my might. I will be reading more of you for sure.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

The first person one needs to love.
well said.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

welcome to the club...hehehehe
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Micha Julian

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

oh, to find that friend within..my friend...
Oh, hormonal, maybe...you are special, this is a goal I seek and ohhhhhhh, (((You))))
It speaks, and it means...bravo!!!!!
love,
mi

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

I love your sense of humour and love this poem!
Chrissie

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Lady A, you continue to mesmorize (sp)me. Give yourself and her a pat on the back for me.

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

the way i see it is that you have Way to much fun with yourownself ha. me hispanic failed (well not failed-but didnt bring anything out of) spanish high 101. so sad such a beautiful beautiful soulful language. yo quiero pero no sabe ha porbrecita
josie

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Great piece Anita
Excellent

William

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

This was great, I loved this one!

Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Whatever it is, it's pretty powerful stuff!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

What about the nudity?

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

LOL...ooooo this is GREAT GREAT GREAT Lady A! It seems we all have our hormonol schizo days...even the menfolk too!!!! :O) hahahahaha
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Lol..he he..Sounds more like me...

Peace, Dove ~

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

This was great, loved it--great originality.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

when that friend is found we then congeal ;) well done!

Reviewed by Jay G

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Viva the "inner voice". One of things I like about this poem is that it has a happy ending.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

LOL at James David... THIS was clever. Sometimes the best friend in the world we all have and know nothing of when we think we are so lonely is just simply ourselves. Lady....you just crack me up. If it feels any better...I totally relate...LOL!

Thanks,
Tersa

...love your hormones! lol ;)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Lady A~
"And we had talks...
And shared our thoughts
On so much did WE agree!
Then one day.... I realized......
The friend I found was ME!"
Love the ending
smiling pax Peggy

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

The title nearly scared me away, little lady. I enjoyed the reading.

Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Hey...the best friend you will ever have will be yourself. If you don't like YOU nobody else will either. I love this...it's SELF-FULL. Bravo.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Hee, hee, your, your best friend
very creative Lady A.......

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

(Having flashbacks)
The judge ordered me to pay $100 a month in alimony to each of my ex's personalities.
Bill Gates couldn't afford that.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

(((lady a))) what a rant! love it...are you reading my thoughts?? i need a place to hide from all this severe weather...IT'S making *me* skitzo...under tornado watches AGAIN...fifth or sixth day in a row...i've lost count...HEELLLPPPP...well done, dear! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)