I Am The Lake (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Beautifully written!
Sheila

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

You are not a lake.. you are a river of human sweetness. I wish I were more than fish..LOL
Very delicate images.. anything but banal.. Bravo, my friend..You must come to Egypt and tell me what you think of the desert sands!

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

This is gorgeous!! From beginning to end and sideways to diagonal, wonderfully concepted, beautiful penned!! Kudos!! :) The picture is stunning, as well!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

Lady A, you show us your serious side and take our breath away! KUdo's!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

Exquisite flow and imagery.

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

This flows seamlessly. Excellent work!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

Lady A I am speechless, both pic and poetry...WOW what a combo!!!!
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((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Jay G

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

Awe inspiring.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

par excellence!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

A Fantastic write Lady A
Excellent to perfection

William

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

One of your best Anita...absolutely stunning poetry. The picture is wonderful too.
Chrissie.
I'm away for the weekend so will try to catch up with poems next week

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

This is the second time I tell you, this was an outstanding write!Great Job, Anita.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

This is so serene, Anita. I love it!
Jill

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

This was so lovely, so very lovely, I loved these lines:

I am the Lake, within my soul
Constant, changing, growing.....whole

so excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

WoW!! Breathtaking picture......and the poem to go so well with it.....just beautiful..geez.....its magical man!!

Love
tinka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

Simply breathtaking Anita! ~Joseph

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

Beautiful verses. Lovely picture too.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 9, 2003

Lady A, beautiful poem. Wonderful flow.