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Feeling a Lick
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Feeling A Lick

I can feel it
And sometimes thats enough
And yet
Sometimes its a tease

Like licking the batter
From the bottom of the bowl
And then being told
You have to wait for the cake to bake

Which would be fine
I do have patience

Except
The oven

WAS NEVER TURNED ON








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 Reviews of "Feeling a Lick"
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
I takes a lickin and keeps on tickin. Sweet write if you don't read between the lines

George J Carroll

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Cake to Bake? Well at least you don't have to wait for the dough to rise. You should try a few casseroles, pop one straight in the oven and then keep it simmering for two hours.
Perthaps we should start a double - entendre challenge
Ian

Reviewed by Jim Beam (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Okay, a bit too long for me to follow. But to me it sounds like a blowjob going wrong.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
LOL, brilliant piece Anita. The knobs are there, all they have to do is turn them...on.

~Sara

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
A class act Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
a good licker will always turn on the oven and know when the cake is ready to bake ;)

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
LOL that title.
This is a very well planned write.
smiles

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
There is an overtness and a subtlety her that is so well created.
This is awesome Lady A!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Oops, I must be in the wrong den - I was looking for the cooking/food/wine section!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
NUMBER ONE!...That couch is so sexy! When a reader sees that--BAM! Well, a reader like me anyway!...lol!

And you know... you are the woman! This style is SO LADY A! You gotta love that! I never expect less than excellence when coming to your den.

Love it!
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed on October 25, 2003
OOh, I like the double message here.... what's inside will always be revealed on the outside. I never used to think of food as erotic, either, till I seen a man eating a stalk of celery... I don't know why it did to me what it did... terrific write...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Great metaphor Anita, you gotta get someone who'll turn you on;-)

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Oh Lady A
Were it not for "never" I would have laughed and laughed;
but then the eternity of it made me sad.

I'm really very glad you posted this new so I could write a respose
that you would see; "Shechinah" may, indeed, speak to the persecution of Wiccans, but as so, that is a gift in the life of the piece independent of my conscious intention. By design the Witch and Giant are achetypical Shadow aspects of each individual; women have Giants, while men have Witches. As an archetypical concept I learned about this from the work of Robert Bly in his book, "A Little Book on the Human Shadow." Most generally in this society, as little girls grow into women we project our Giant energy out onto men; thus there is appearant confrontation -- boys on the other hand tend to grow into projecting their witch onto women, also resulting in confrontation. A woman who has integrated her Giant is not likely to encounter abuse. The man who has integrated his Witch is as unlikely to be manipulated by a woman -- without need of confrontation. It just totally changes the dance. -- Blessings, Vicky

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Interesting write that can be read more then one way :-)


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