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Exorcise The Demon(My attempt at being gothic)
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....... we invent conscience and prey on ourselves. ~Elbert Hubbard +=+EXORCISE THE DEMON+=+ Chamber of tomorrow, fortress of the knight Armor shielding sorrows, dent and scar of fight Built upon a high cliff.... by an icy sea Melody of gray mist.... ghoulish symphony Phantom legion taunting, shrieking cries of war Anguished spirits flaunting...wounded, bloody, gore Dead eyes mock the guilty, chained to knight by deed Exorcise the demons, prey on bended knee Lady A Dec 2003 My attempt at gothic symbolism muuhaahaa

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Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on December 22, 2003

Ohhhhhhh very cool! Love the dark poems...I used to write all dark......but I'm sorta stuck on love....lol This is damn fine poetry.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 19, 2003

Would go well with The Lord of the Rings. Enjoyed this, Anita.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

Excellent write!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

Fair Lady A you've out done yourself. ;)
Very good!

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

Well done, one can almost see the mist rising from off the stones of the castle walls in the pre-dawn as the moon wanes... Very well done, Lady A!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

Excellent, chilling, dark write. Very well done.
~Chrissie :)

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

I especially like the last line, "...prey on bended knee." The exorciser using prayer as a weapon.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

Makes me shiver. I wear black all the time and my students say I'm gothic. I don't know. I love your write. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

Well written piece Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

Excellent,deep write Lady A! methinks you have some gothic hidden somewhere in that brilliant brain of yours;-)!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

i really like the implications of this poem ... yes, we must exorcise the demons within us and surrounding us ... all the devils are really angels wanting to be set free."

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

really good Lady A, it sure had my attemtion, all you work so great, al

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

This was excellently dark and chilling, excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

Lady A, Excellent read. There are certainly demons in everyone's closet which need exorcising.

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