The beauty of the autumn leaves
As fall coolness arrives
Embraces ‘til the soul believes
The fate before its eyes
In this time, peacefulness is found
But yet, the winter creeps
Into the forefront of the day
Dark clouds loom all around
While on the grass, an acorn sleeps
To keep the cold at bay.
The earthen floor, once crisp and green
Will turn a brownish hue
The novel newness that was seen
In spring will soon be through
Replaced by perfect beads of ice
On maple trees, stripped bare
Perched on a hillside, once alive
With birds and small field mice
That went for shelter from the air
In their will to survive.
The autumn displays its wonder
For a mere moment in time
Soon the leaves will relax under
Raw conditions, in their prime
While we will embrace the changes
We shall wish for days of yore
And our own respected stories
Of our personal exchanges
With the world, outside our door
Once filled with sweet autumn glories.
© 2007 – Jill Eisnaugle’s Poetry Collection
God Bless,
Sharon
God Bless,
Lew
God Bless
Michelle~
Outstanding presentation!!
Love And Peace to you Always..Morning Star
Take care,
Sherry
Ron
For a first this is awesome,
Excellent,
Michael
"Ode to Autumn Glories" presented the correct rhyme scheme - except the first stanza, ARRIVES/EYES, second and fourth lines; -- and of course, The absence of proper poetic meter.
Better to leave this just as an ODE without KEATS' form, for it is
a wonderful composition abounding in poetic excellence.
I have enjoyed the reading of "Ode to Autumn Glories".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love,
Alexandra*
Thanks for sharing!!
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Susan