Very beautiful presentation that moved along at just the right cadence while "counting the days." While those words resonated, my hearing deficit made it difficult for me to discern some of the other phrases that you worked hard to emphasize your message.
Like Richard suggested, a simple scroll of the words of the poem would add greatly to the visual presentation. With your voice as emphasis.
An interesting presentation Robin. Enjoyed. A new phase of poetry perhaps. For those that are deaf, the text scrolling somewhere on the screen might be helpful. Hope you are well. Thanx 4 sharing. r
Like Richard suggested, a simple scroll of the words of the poem would add greatly to the visual presentation. With your voice as emphasis.
Ron