Great write:..hunted down like a dog,terrified and hysterically running.. this poem is "piece of American History"..A bit like a chant.."they callin my name" ..meaning they know you're there.Anne.
Great rhtyhm, visions of times gone by and still remarkably alive. Some deep thing you have written there. It is catching me like books I have read as a child. There's something in it you can't escape.
Original. Captivating all around. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
I do hope they are not callin' you to that final resting place. And, if not, bring your pad and pen on down here, we'll roll out the red carpet for you. Y'all. LOL I realy did like this piece of fine writing. Touched me.
Sorry for the slipUp the otherday...lol!!
Love Tinka
excellent rhythm ...
This has gotta be one of my fav's of yours.
The crastmanship is excellence..
Chanti
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
subject. Not everyone has that talent.This was superb!
etw
Visions and emotions captured and poetized with inspired rhythm.
Healthy Long Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU