Dearest friends,
For some mysterious reason, this poem, which I originally posted yesterday, suddenly disappeared from the Poetry board, LOL! I’ve tried several things, like updating it, logging in and out and then in again, to no avail; then, I asked AD for advice and help… but then, while I wait, I’ve decided to try yet something else – to simply post it again and see what happens! So, here it goes, along with the absolutely marvelous reviews it received yesterday, while it was still showing in the board… and with my warm, loving, heartfelt thanks to my precious friends Leland, Karla and Richard (I’ll write to you all soon!). {{{{{{{{{{{{{HUGS}}}}}}}}}}}}}
A slight dusting of ice lingers to pools of what could have been the artist’s first inspiration, before the paintbrush decided otherwise.
Grass, as vividly green as the molehills are dark and rich with underground mysteries, with the secrets of growth seen from the root; and sun, the early sun of mornings that run late and so dash through trees and the sky all flushed in the face.
How does one paint this, my love, leaving not even a subliminal hue out, not really forgotten, but waiting for its moment in that corner of the palette, like an utterance held in thought behind the lips?
One doesn’t; and so, a slight dusting of warm kisses lingers to pools of blue, daring them to become eyes that open and follow the ultimate inspiration of fingertips along vividly pulsing skin.
Dark and rich revelations arise and blend in all corners of a canvas closer and closer to overflowing, at the center, with the perfect expression of nudity; and sun, the early sun of this winter morning that runs late like passion held in, behind dreams, in a much too long night - dashes through the mergence of our bodies and crumpled sheets.
A burst of all possible colours in the unison of bliss and then a sigh – catch us, all flushed in the face.
Thank You, so much, for this mysteriously disappearing poem. Perhaps it is because of those "subliminal hues" you like to sprinkle around the canvas (LOL!). At any rate, I love your artistry, whether visible or not. The "flushed in the face" part makes me smile and as for the "crumpled sheets" ... well, oh, you know what I'm thinking. ;)
Alexandra, This is simply beautifully painted! An emotional masterpiece with threads of brilliant colorful passion splashed on. I absolutely love this poem!
Peace, love, and light,
The colors of words came alive in this fantastic write that shines of love, passion, devotion and beauty all wrapped in a kalaidascope of the poet's own creation...well done.
Would that all professing love for another could feel and experience this. YES ... you are loved by the Poet named Joseph, ... and if this fact is an award given to those who have found success in life ... you are number one in this readers eyes.
Where the hell are you these days?
With Respect, Love and (((((((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))))))
P. S. Have I ever told you that you are brilliant ... and also vulnerable, and also someone I miss when she doesn't visit?
Reviewed by The StormSpinner
This is beautifully imaged and penned, Alexandra, a most wonderful gift of love presented in verse. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, and Merry Christmas, Karla.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Exquisite expression of your depth of feeling for Joseph. Your emotion is feast for the eyes -- vicarious immergence in your sharing love.
Love and opalescent rainbows of {{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}},
Leland
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Thank You, so much, for this mysteriously disappearing poem. Perhaps it is because of those "subliminal hues" you like to sprinkle around the canvas (LOL!). At any rate, I love your artistry, whether visible or not. The "flushed in the face" part makes me smile and as for the "crumpled sheets" ... well, oh, you know what I'm thinking. ;)
Amo te muito,
Teu Joseph
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
always,
randy
Fee
Would that all professing love for another could feel and experience this. YES ... you are loved by the Poet named Joseph, ... and if this fact is an award given to those who have found success in life ... you are number one in this readers eyes.
Where the hell are you these days?
With Respect, Love and (((((((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))))))
P. S. Have I ever told you that you are brilliant ... and also vulnerable, and also someone I miss when she doesn't visit?
Reviewed by The StormSpinner
This is beautifully imaged and penned, Alexandra, a most wonderful gift of love presented in verse. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, and Merry Christmas, Karla.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Exquisite expression of your depth of feeling for Joseph. Your emotion is feast for the eyes -- vicarious immergence in your sharing love.
Love and opalescent rainbows of {{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}},
Leland