I Remember when we were young
and love was new and unsure
I was your one and only girl
we spent hours just staring at the stars
and your kisses left stars in my eyes
and a song in my heart
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Remember when phone calls
lasted well into sun up
we couldn't wait to meet at school
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When you remember me
remember that day we said I do
and our love was made new
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When you remember me,
remember our first night
as we made love under moonlight
I remember you the night we met
and the magic that started when you said
you saved the last dance for me
your dream girl, the lady in red
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Reviews of "When you remember"
Reviewed by Cindy Rasey (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2009
Hi Denise,
You have plenty of talent yourself, your poems
are very moving and come deep from the soul.
I haven't had time to read all your
poems and stories,but what I have seen
are very good. Keep writing.
Excellant Dee, don't we all have a love story like this from our first love, we can have many loves in our lifetimes, a few true loves, but our first love is always the sweetest memory...no matter how it turns out.
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You have plenty of talent yourself, your poems
are very moving and come deep from the soul.
I haven't had time to read all your
poems and stories,but what I have seen
are very good. Keep writing.
Cindy
This is very beautiful.I'm sure your kisses are sweeter than Hersheys
take care
Edwin
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