Upon his pampered neck, she laid her hungry fangs with evil intent and with cursed passion, bit deep and tasted him with a vampiric suck. As he watched in horrifying happiness. His liquid of red dripping from the lips he thought so dear, of them he feared to kiss.
With sharpened fingernails of bloodlust, she slashed at his heartbeat and reddened his chest with 10 lines of bleeding ecstasy. As he rejoiced in tortuous bliss, from the fingertips, whose touch he dreaded with cheer.
With black cape, she covered his body in dark shadow. As he turned off the lights in his crying eyes and waited with frightened delight, for more spine-scaring treats of the fallen night. Only her spooky love, darker than doom could inflict on him.
You bad bad boy trying to give me nightmares,I wont be able to sleep tonight now,(we have bats here outside in fruit trees,true)this poem was too spooky,I am trembling in my shoes.Did you have to mention fangs?
Seriously thought Handsome,this was one spine chilling write.I really liked it a lot.
While this poem had some good descriptions and fit the Halloween mood, I felt this gave us the same ol vampire stories we hear about time and time again. Which is OK, but I was hoping for something different. I felt there could have been a little more originality here. Still an OK poem for Halloween.
yikes! what a spooky write, ron; well done! sorry i haven't been able to respond to your writes, but the computer was down for three weeks (they had a virus; the trojan horse crap); today they are FINALLY back up, and i am back, too! even wrote two stories today; check 'em out! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
No second date or was it eternal excellent .
Taylor
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
The thrill of the chill! Great write.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Ok Handsum....now I do not believe that you would fear her kiss.....LOL.....all funnin aside.....tremendous write...so poetic..so smooth....chilling tale .....wonderfully written....floria
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Scary, did you meet her online?
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Love at first bite....admit it, he loved it....lol ;)
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Excellent write.
S
What a super spookie write...
I love it!!!
Trixie :)
smooth, Hart! very smooth...
Gina, smiling
Seriously thought Handsome,this was one spine chilling write.I really liked it a lot.
Marlene
I like the picture!
Excellent picture!
Great poem!
Amor
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Love Tinka
Taylor
Excellent..ty..Dani
Cheers
Lorrha
LOL
great write
lol.....
pax
muuhaahaaa
A