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Vampiress
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A dark write for Halloween.


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Vampiress
By Handsum-Hart

Upon his pampered neck,
she laid her hungry fangs 
with evil intent
and with cursed passion,
bit deep and tasted him
with a vampiric suck.
As he watched
in horrifying happiness.
His liquid of red
dripping from the lips
he thought so dear,
of them he feared to kiss.

With sharpened fingernails
of bloodlust,
she slashed at his heartbeat
and reddened his chest
with 10 lines of bleeding ecstasy.
As he rejoiced in tortuous bliss,
from the fingertips, whose touch
he dreaded with cheer.

With black cape,
she covered his body
in dark shadow.
As he turned off the lights
in his crying eyes and waited
with frightened delight,
for more spine-scaring treats
of the fallen night.
Only her spooky love,
darker than doom
could inflict on him.

© 2003 Ronald Howard Moman


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 Reviews of "Vampiress"
Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
Reviewed on November 16, 2003
Damn good. You do an amazing job when it comes to imagery.

Reviewed on November 1, 2003
This was outstanding, I loved it! very chilling!

Reindeer

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Uhhh, that one is scary!
Excellent write.
S

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
Hi Ron,
What a super spookie write...
I love it!!!


Trixie :)

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
Pain and Pleasure, Fear and Thrill...and Halloween Fun...

smooth, Hart! very smooth...

Gina, smiling

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
You bad bad boy trying to give me nightmares,I wont be able to sleep tonight now,(we have bats here outside in fruit trees,true)this poem was too spooky,I am trembling in my shoes.Did you have to mention fangs?
Seriously thought Handsome,this was one spine chilling write.I really liked it a lot.

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Excellent

Marlene

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
While this poem had some good descriptions and fit the Halloween mood, I felt this gave us the same ol vampire stories we hear about time and time again. Which is OK, but I was hoping for something different. I felt there could have been a little more originality here. Still an OK poem for Halloween.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Sensual write! Only you could do write that!
I like the picture!
Excellent picture!
Great poem!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Excellent tale....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Fantastic tale of dark, sensual and thrilling proportions.
Amor

Reviewed on October 28, 2003
yikes! what a spooky write, ron; well done! sorry i haven't been able to respond to your writes, but the computer was down for three weeks (they had a virus; the trojan horse crap); today they are FINALLY back up, and i am back, too! even wrote two stories today; check 'em out! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Excellent chilling write. Love it.

Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Sex and fright in one. Good write Handsum!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
A dark, tingling, chilling pleasure!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
a dark sensual tale...well crafted and sinfully told;-)you enjoyed this too much Handsum;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
A real Action/Thrillerrrrrrrr!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Love it !!!

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
No second date or was it eternal excellent .
Taylor

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
The thrill of the chill! Great write.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Ok Handsum....now I do not believe that you would fear her kiss.....LOL.....all funnin aside.....tremendous write...so poetic..so smooth....chilling tale .....wonderfully written....floria

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Scary, did you meet her online?

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Love at first bite....admit it, he loved it....lol ;)

Excellent..ty..Dani

Reviewed by Laura Via
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
This write made this reader shudder with delight! Kudos to you for such a darling dark write.

Cheers
Lorrha

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Those damn dating services!
LOL
great write
lol.....
pax
muuhaahaaa
A


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