A Man's Raging Kisses Of Stormy Passion By Handsum-Hart
He lured her into the eye Of a passionate storm Raging with his wet kisses Forcing her to use Her lips as oars And row her untested mouth Across a great sea of passion Roaring from his heart With romantic winds Gusting up to 100 heartbeats per kiss
Fiercely she rowed With her unsinkable lips Through wave after wave Of his raging wet kisses Until she reached The quiet shores of paradise Nestled between the semicircles Of his heart Where he had A tenderized feast Of endless love prepared To serve her romantic-beated lips And passion-soaked mouth
Hi Ron,
Your mind is so creative.
Is is super fantastic.
btw, Do you serve napkins?
I couldn't resist.. hehehe
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
"With romantic winds
Gusting up to 100 heartbeats per kiss"
Handsum ...your metaphors are great here...fantastic lines...just love this one...and the art is wonderful....please be careful...Serial Kate is after you....lock your doors...LOL...awesome writing..floria
Handsum you have me sinking in the vast waters of your passionate sea, Don't let me drown;-)...Fantastic write!It's a joy to read your poetry!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
Great write, wish my heart would beat that slow when kissed by the lady of the dreams that she shows, great write old bean..
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
Man oh man...Ronald...you can sure whip up a
fever in the minds of your women readers!
What if the girl can't swim???
Oh...yes...she did reach the "quiet shores of Paradise,"
didn't she?
What a cozy windup...MmmmmmHmmmmm.
An intern architect at Ryan and Associates, Mateo Diaz has spent the last year learning his craft under the tutelage of partner Alex Ryan. Alex is the closest thing to family that Mateo has known since losing his own family years ago. But not even Al
Gee...this is lovely
So passionate and beautifully written
~Chrissie
well, now, i can see why they call you hansum hart--passion just rains down in this one :) i love this forecast :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Your mind is so creative.
Is is super fantastic.
btw, Do you serve napkins?
I couldn't resist.. hehehe
Trixie :)
Gusting up to 100 heartbeats per kiss"
Handsum ...your metaphors are great here...fantastic lines...just love this one...and the art is wonderful....please be careful...Serial Kate is after you....lock your doors...LOL...awesome writing..floria
You Romantic You!!
Beautiful write with a heartbeat attached!!
Love Tinka
fever in the minds of your women readers!
What if the girl can't swim???
Oh...yes...she did reach the "quiet shores of Paradise,"
didn't she?
What a cozy windup...MmmmmmHmmmmm.