He Gift-Wrapped Her Heart In Sheets Of Soft Affection (poem) by Handsum Hart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

The title made me swoon and the material was well expressed.
except the valentine day reference.. lol it was my wedding day
and Im divorced a long time..its amazing how many people celebrate
my (ex) anniversary - lol
good job - Donna ;)

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

I absolutely love the title and how it weaves into the poem. There is no greater gift to one's self than love given. Wonderful write!

♫ Jackie

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

fun and charming.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

soft, meaningful, romantic passion

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Very romantic

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 7, 2004

superb poetry!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on February 7, 2004

Hey, when "whatchamacallits" are involved, there's likely to be some kinda trouble... ;)
As always, an enjoyable write. Thank you.

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on February 7, 2004

I agree with Ed--this is priceless. You are an incredibly gifted writer.

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on February 7, 2004

Oh this is beautiful, very romantic loved it...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 7, 2004

Well, if the ladies like it, who am I to disagree? Great romantic write, Handsum. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on February 7, 2004

Hi Ron,
<sigh>
I agree with Lisa, "You
are spoiling us ladies" :)
Simply breathtaking...

Love the adorable picture
as well...really cute!!!

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 7, 2004

Absolutely gorgeous..line for line.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 7, 2004

You know Ron you are spoiling the females of AD with these gorgeous tender writes. We are now expecting our mates to do this for us...but ofcourse it never happens!
You are quickly becoming a very rare commidity in the needing section of life!
Very well written..very deeply felt. You only seem to get better! Lisa

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Soft affection will melt her heart, great write.

Nancy

Reviewed by Valerie A. Blessing (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

What a great poem for this time of the year!!!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

This is so moving..great work, Handsum!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Another uniique and lovely poem Handsum, perfect for your valentine!;-)

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Oh, my! This simply is beautiful: exquisite writing, Ron! I like your treatment of sunrise and sunset: a whole new way of saying it. Fantastic ~~BonnieQ

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Oh...Ron...thank goodness that your sweet personality
was not destroyed by wicked Kate maneuvers. And I am
so glad to see that your "watchamacallits" weren't damaged,
either! Ha ha....
A sugar-sweet poem, indeed!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

soft and satin sweet

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

WOW.....whatchamacallits? LOL....what a treat this gem was Handsum..I see Kate didnt harm your writing a bit...this is soft and lovely...you should do a book......great write...floria

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Beautiful and so romantic, lovely to read this morning,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Well..now whatchamacallit?

Exiting write Handsum You!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Very romantic and passionate. Great write.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

His romantic little whatchamacallits

Priceless, Ron. Another romantic winner.