Valentine's Day Lady, What Can I Do To You? (poem) by Handsum Hart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 19, 2004

"Letting my words slowly burn
Upon your soft tissue"
deserves some thought there :-)
Nice write, enjoyable to read, Handsum!

Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on February 16, 2004

I hope you do these things all year round, not just on Valentine's Day. She's a lucky lady! Hope your Valentine's Day was a great one!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2004

Ron, this is a Valentine flower; bursting open in all its glory --
awaiting to receive its gift of love. Bill

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 15, 2004

Nicely done, Monsieur Romantique. The ladies will love it. Love and peace to you, Handsum. Regis

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on February 13, 2004

Yes Yes Yes, absolutely beautiful hot write, you have a way with words to heat up any woman here, keep up the great work.

Nancy

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 13, 2004

I like the pic as well as your poem. They're both so good.

Happy Valentine's Day To You too!

~ May / Sandie ~

Reviewed by C Smith (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2004

kudos HH

thumbs up on this one

C Smith

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

Wonderfulllllll! It's a wonder this page isn't afire! You got my vote!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

You bet! :-) Very passionate write!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

This is so romantic perfection for Valentines day.....
Handsum excellent...

~peace

Peg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

Yes!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

Excellent write...lovely!!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

Handsum you are so imaginative! This one soars as it singes;-)I love your poems, and your graphics are always unique too!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

Wooooooow....this is hot....great write Handsum...and what else
could we expect from you nearing valentines day...great
writing...loved every line...and beautiful graphic.....floria

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

hot, erotic ... the women will luv this valentine's day special!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

You know Handsum..you are going to continue with these writes until you have females beating down your door!
We seem to be able to hone in on your rare and precious comodity..This one is the top of the mountain when it comes to romance. Just excellent. Lisa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

Can I set this poem on fire
With the flames of desire
Burning in your bosom
Until charcoal gray it becomes
And pour the warm ashes
Over your erotic hot spots

Yikes. This one is too hot to handle!! Call the Fire Department!!