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C L U B US
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they do exist...all over the world. These 'Private Clubs', close-knit 'social circles' where their way of thinking, their main objective is... money. And they exist because there are people that feel it's all about 'me', it's all about 'we', it's all about...'us'.


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The door is open here...with limited chairs

and out of a whole...

only less than a quarter know we're here

$

Invisible is the look...

we slightly move...then betray...but

it's the total opposite of what we appear to be

$

And due to keeping secrets...lies...have been told

...members have been granted commerce...but

life is ...unsure

$

So, please...follow the greed within you and

join this...private club

 

 

copyright;AsaDSeeley/2009  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Asa D Seeley, poet, writer, author, artist

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 Reviews of "C L U B US"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on April 16, 2012
THIS IS A TRUTH THAT CANNOT BE IGNORED OR DENIED AND THESE 'CLUBS' DO EXIST BECAUSE OF THE 'LUST' FOR MORE AND MORE MONEY...REGARDLESS OF THE CONSEQUENCES. CONSEQUENCES...WHICH ARE ALWAYS SAD AND MANY TIMES SO DEVASTATING WITH THE TRAGIC DESTRUCTION OF HUMAN LIVES AND OUR NATURAL RESOURCES. YOU HAVE APTLY DESCRIBED THE 'DOOM' OF OUR VERY EXISTENCE. A TIMELY WORK DONE SO VERY WELL. THANK YOU, SON AND GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE AND MUCH FAITH....JOYCE(MOM)*HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on September 10, 2011
You have touched on a subject that affects so many in various ways. They say money can be the root of evil, but thats not always true. In any society, the almighy dollar can buy some things which otherwise might be unobtainable. Your words give one much to think about. I understand what it's like where you are as my son has been through some of it also. Keep writing and sharing Asa . You are truely gifted....M

Reviewed on August 18, 2011
Joyce,

How true, some people are so clannish. Your son is very talented.

Mary

Reviewed by Barbara Henry
Reviewed on August 15, 2011
Very profound message,Asa and one that needs to be told repeatedly.
To your continued success.

Barbara J. Henry

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 11, 2011
Asa, in my parlance this are the world's ever growing population of "plastic people". Aggressive, obtrusive, disingenuous, ego centric paper cut out people. Reality, morality, ethics are not a part of their personalities. Their every move, word and action is, MEEEEEEE! You've summed this real life scenario up quite well in your, "CLUBS'US". I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 27, 2011
Sharp and oh so relevant, Asa,
your finger on the pulse of real agenda..
you have this right and i like the style
you choose to communicate it.
Stay strong and focused.

John

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 20, 2011
an excellent write Asa
brings to light the tip of the iceberg of society clubs
that only worries about their own interest........
Peace be with you you all

William

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on July 20, 2011
A very interesting insight, Joyce.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on July 9, 2011
There is much to ponder in this piece. "Private" clubs of all kinds exist: some are purely evil, some are filled with the greedy and selfish, and only a very few welcome all. A sad truth, but well written. God bless. ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on July 9, 2011
Asa,

Your powerful words ring a blatant truth! The ultra wealthy are a different breed from most of us and some, not all, are very arrogant re: their wealth. The majority of people have a regular or somewhat middle income existence and they are the people on this earth who are, for the most part, REAL down-to-earth people and I say ... God bless them! Your take on this subject is awesome and well penned. Let us not, as a people, ever join this private club of greed.

Well done, keep writing. Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by J.A. Aarntzen (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2011
We all want to belong to the haves but when you really look at it, it is the have nots that have the people of substance and character and make far better company than the haves. Great work Asa!

Reviewed on July 6, 2011
You hit it on the nail Asa. Shameful when life is centered on making money and ignoring more important things.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 6, 2011
Substance to ponder upon for sure; than you for sharing Asa's verses, Joyce. Love and blessings to you both,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 4, 2011
Powerful lyrics!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Daniel Keith
Reviewed on July 4, 2011
Powerful words in this poem, but oh so true. Keep the faith Asa, and keep writing. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 4, 2011
Sadly it's truth you write about, Asa....too many in this world focus on the stuff that doesn't matter in the end.....some very powerful phrasing here. Well done! Keep on writing....

Anna

Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on July 3, 2011
Very good Asa.

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on July 3, 2011
Wonderfully written poem indeed Laura

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on July 3, 2011
WONDERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on July 2, 2011
I wrked in both the Metropolitan, and Williams clubs. You needed to be very wealthy to join. The filthy rich flaunt themselves because of there millions. 99 percent made those millions illegal. Thanks for sharing this powerful writing, Asa.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 2, 2011
No country exists where you will not find these elitist.


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