Each new day is filled with abundant promise & beauty!
Crystal droplets/
like morning dew/
infused with fallen Sun rays/
a refreshing impression/
of sparkling diamond encrusted nectar/
covets the beauty of first fruits/
& opportune moments/
offering up their succulent delights/
an optic oblation/
to the empyrean predawn illuminations/
of promise
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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
You help keep my Websters from looking new. Oblation and empyrean. Thanks. I like your line divisions and just the suggestion of "opportune moments/" is Spring-like. ~~ Diana
In "A Touch of Your Presence" are words that would inspire, encourage and strengthen one's soul when faced with challenges and difficulties and to know the awesomeness of God's power.
Ron