Thank you for sharing

Beautiful...I ecspecially liked this verse...

Meditating on
Prayers over and over
Disposing the pain

How True!

God Bless

Much saddness is portrayed in this piece............M

What a golden pen you possess Gwendolyn!
Sadly felt but the wisdom will strengthen!
A joy to always read!
Wow! I missed reading you Gwend..Sorry it took awhile!
The Blessings here are strong throughout
from your hearts Soul!

Thank you for sharing "Crushed Senyru" Lord Hear My Prayers/Tears
Warmest Blessings! WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
God Bless!
Smile and Enjoy your many blessings~!

A 'quiet storm' of sadness eloquently expressed in poetry. I believe that our Maker gives us sadness and pain to cleanse our soul and bring us closer to Him. Cheer up my Friend. You are loved more than you will ever know.

Sincerely,
Regino

Heartfelt offering!!

Love Tinka

Very heartfelt emotions
Very intense feelings of a Broken heart
Excellent imagery and flow
A deeply felt write
Beautifully expressed!!
Love And Peace To You Always
Your Friend..Morning Star

touching, heartfelt senryu, Gewn ...

Well done...Hugsssssssss

Delicate

Very powerful write of broken hearts, broken lives. Thanks!

Be safe,
Karen

Intense look at broken hearts and the pain that never ends when love is broken like a fragile pice of antique china. Well done Gwen.

Fee

Excellent writes each unit within itself
Well Penned one ad all
Peace Be with you

William
Love & Peace
(((((((((((((SEMPER FI)))))))))))))

A poemization of psycho-social feelings in poetic-philosophic picture.
An outstanding composition in contents and message.

I salute You, Poet.

In reverent admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

A powerful, beautiful writing...keep your pen flowing because it provides great reads to others.

Sad set of senyrus, Gwen; we are all feeling shocked and sad over what has happened in Virginia; God help us! Even our schools and churches are no longer safe!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Sad Senryu's that are well written.

Gwendolyn,

POWERFUL, thought provoking lines in senryu format: well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Excellent, Gwen. There is so much said here.
Love,
CJ

So very creative. I can feel this very touching senyru. Especially like ..."Un-cried tears think so." Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria

A powerful message here dear Gwendolyn. Blessings to you.

Light and Wisdom ...