This poem is dedicated to a poet friend of mine who was recently a stalking victim, but the problem is now resolved....
Here flies a murder of crows,
Here lies an unwanted rose.
Three crows squabble
in a twisted tree
blind
to human lunacy,
where man goes
out hunting his prey
and woman dreads
the fading day,
where sounds
exist to plague the mind
and confidence
is left behind;
so cast the rose
down on the floor
forget
who put it through the door.
Some people fear the dark,
some people are the dark.
Now she runs
from the lonely freak
and only the dark
can speak
as the crows squawk on
she locks up tight
the chub, the bolt
lock out the night
as daylight fades
everyone's out
"alone, alone!"
the black birds shout;
a sash window
a glass-paned door
a net curtain;
perfect before
but now
they might as well be mist
between haven
and anarchist
day after day
and endless nights
waiting for him
to blow the lights -
Some people fear the dark,
some people are the dark.
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Reviews of "The Hunted"
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
What a powerful way to begin a poem!
Here flies a murder of crows,
Here lies an unwanted rose.
What a powerful poem!
Judges, AD poetry contest September 2003, take note!
This is genial!
Richard Vallance
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
Brilliantly dark and threatening and yet oddly empowering, because, ultimately the twisted psyche and lunatic motives of the stalker cannot triumph. A very interesting and intriguing write on many levels, I congratulate you on a terrific write!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
I agree with Robert.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
This is a mot interesting and intriguingly done write...Very Good!!!!
~Nikki~
This is a cracker, sweetie.
Strangely I read another poem here yesterday that cast crows as harbingers of trouble. That Poe guy has a lot to answer for, they're quite whacky birds really.
Ian
Did you ever wonder what happened after the Archangel Michael through the demons out of heaven? Let one of them guide you through the origin of evil in the world.
Here flies a murder of crows,
Here lies an unwanted rose.
What a powerful poem!
Judges, AD poetry contest September 2003, take note!
This is genial!
Richard Vallance
~Nikki~
Strangely I read another poem here yesterday that cast crows as harbingers of trouble. That Poe guy has a lot to answer for, they're quite whacky birds really.
Ian
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)