Come Surrender (poem) by John T Banasiewicz Jr on AuthorsDen

Come Surrender
by John T Banasiewicz Jr → (All Poetry by John T Banasiewicz Jr)
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Dream That Came True

Come with me my love and see what I have prepared A room of burning vanilla candles and fresh cut rose�s scent Walk thru the door into my arms In them you need fear no harm My deep voice changes to soft whispers Telling your delicate ears words that releases your fears My eyes look deep into your crystal star eyes Revealing what my heart and soul desire Our embrace past being a hug It is beginning to release our love Precious, fragile, a masterpiece Gently I lay you down on satin sheets Softly and tenderly my lips meet yours Lips sweet and moist like fresh cherries Each kiss more passionate as the sweetness grows My tongue tracing slowly, sliding thru finding yours Performing a ballet to music our whispers now make Sounds of passion like two violins softly playing together Our ballet of embraces and kisses becoming so passionate Music leading our bodies to give each other more pleasure Nipples hard and touching together Now tells us it is time to make love forever Our bodies become totally one Not to be separated until we both surrender This ballet dance of lovemaking finally ends Let us snuggle and cuddle until the dance begins again John Thomas Banasiewicz Jr Copyright 2004

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Wow.
Sensual, passionate write. Must have been THE perfect night.
I envy you.
Great poem.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

"Come Surrender" can make Cupid and Venus smile!

A sensual poetic grandiose.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

This was so lovely and romantic, just beautiful poetry!

Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

a beautiful romantic and deeply sensuous poem!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Beautiful and sensual Tommy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

John...this is a very sensual piece of romantic poetry...it is practically burning up my computers screen...hot stuff...excellent work...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)

With all this enchanting passion, she couldn't help but surrender and fulfill your dream! ...A beautiful, sensual, and very elegant write, Dear Poet!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

This is a very sensual and romantic piece of poetry, Poet!!! You have continued to amaze me with your golden quill!!! Outstanding write!!! Bravo!!! Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

I love the idea of a ballet dance of lovemaking.....in conjures up a wonderful image. Your writing continues to strengthen and your voice becomes ever clearer. You've captured and brought to life a passion of 2 people - real or from a dream - either way - fantastic.

~Rose~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Sounds of passion like two violins softly playing together

That's quite a dream come true you've got, Tommy, and this is quite a wonderful romantic passionate write.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Wow! A dream one would want to have over and over again. Or maybe just never wake from in the first place.
Delicate and tenderly expressed. Lisa

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

John, who would not want to surrender to the luscious morsel lying in bed for the taking. Remember the song, "Ruby Don't Take Your Love To Town?" No don't let her take her love to someone else; seize the day and her as one. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

WONDERFUL sensual poem!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

Tommy,
This is so beautiful poet so sensual emotive so
tenderly versed this beauty is a masterpiece....

Lady peg