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John T Banasiewicz Jr

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Midnight Stroll
by John T Banasiewicz Jr → (All Poetry by John T Banasiewicz Jr)
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Stroll taken not long ago


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Midnight moon reflecting off the ocean’s wave tops

Warm ocean water rolling over our bare feet

Strolling slowly to feel each grain of sand so moist and soft beneath        

Together hands held tight, as eyes take neither out of their sight 

Stopping to listen to the ocean’s sweet melody of rolling waves

Soft whispers to each other of our love today

Taking her small soft hand holding it tender in mine

My soft lips her hand now feels

Kisses so special sending a thrill

Looking behind we see our foot paths washed away

Eyes making contact and saying the same

The ocean can’t remove the foot paths we made this day

 

John Thomas Banasiewicz Jr

Copyright 2004

 


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 Reviews of "Midnight Stroll"
Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Fantastic write and view. Thanks for sharing this.

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
Breathtakingly beautiful...

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
Beautiful, touching, sensitive, lasting - what a true poem is. Thanks for sharing.
Monette

Reviewed on July 20, 2004
A beautiful image, Tommy - followed-up with a masterfully penned poetic piece! A superb write ...

Robert

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
Graphic image and verses complement one another to produce an effective poem, John. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
This is some walk on the beach Tommy...great image...beautiful...Fletcher B

Reviewed on July 19, 2004
This one is almost like one of my poems "Waves", I like the scenario a lot. Good work.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2004
Wonderful image of your walk on the beach.
Specially precious as you had someone by your side to share this with you.
Outstanding photo.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on July 18, 2004
This is so tender, just beautiful. Well expressed. (And wow, what a gorgeous photo.)

Reviewed by Rose L
Reviewed on July 18, 2004
The ocean has always meant so much to me for this very reason.....the mystery and awe of life create footprints permanently etched. Sweeping picture and stunning words come together to form another poem of beauty. Well done my dear friend, well done indeed.

~Rose~

Reviewed on July 18, 2004
This was so lovely, and the picture was just beautiful, what a wonderful presentation!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on July 18, 2004
Tommy, first of all I had to get past the image, which I admit to just staring at for a long period of time. It's gorgeous. Then I started reading your poem that spoke directly to the heart. Putting them together is unmistakably an awesome display.
Absolutely remarkable work.

Lisa

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
endearing, romantic poem ... true love cannot be erased ...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Take me away romance this is gorgeous....
Stunning piece Tommy.....

LP

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
This is absolutely romantic and breath taking. Love the photo!

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Wow..this blew me away. Excellent, romantic write!
I agree with Thomas...we should all remember the beautiful
moments and not the 'sands' of time wash them away.
Beautiful poem, my friend~!!

~Linda

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Awesome deep write Tommy!!
Wow!! This one is a Knocker buddy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Tommy, the closing just knocked me right out of the chair!!!… If only couples would remember those wonderful moments in a relationship, it may help keep it alive, especially during the times they start questioning whether or not they were meant to be together in the first place!!!… Exceptional poetry pours from your quill, Poet!!!… Well-done!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Sounds like a magnificent romantic stroll, Tommy, and a wonderful poem about it.


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