odd odd odd...in my head, had to write it...little depressed today :(
Velvet blackness pressing in encasing me in steel bands of fear feeling small, helpless and obsolete the walls of this tomb draw ever near breath drawn in fleeting gasps must and rot permeating the air trapped in this opressive dungeon eyes glazing in an open stare paralysis takes me slowly draining my determination to fight suffocating to their maniacal laughter succumbing to the lunacy of the night
Beauty and knowledge mingled in the poemization of "Asphyxia" - and art abounds in this magnificent composition in major art to enrich THE AMERICAN FINE LETTERS.
The fortunate inherit riches, prestige, positive notoriety. Those not so lucky bear legacies filled with poverty, infamy or, worse yet, the unhinged insanity and murderous urges of their ancestors.
May your determination always prevail!
Love & friendship Suzie xox :-)
Gina
Love Tinka
Love,
Eileen
This is darkly wonderful, and imparts your feeling of depression perfectly. -- Jeff
Birgit and Roger
A tight, claustrophobic feel to this excellent write. Well done! *shivers*
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Beauty and knowledge mingled in the poemization of "Asphyxia" - and art abounds in this magnificent composition in major art to enrich THE AMERICAN FINE LETTERS.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU