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Sweet Seventeen (Houki Natsumi)
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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If you heart is broken...you should look, away from any city, in the middle of the fields and from a distance in a clear night with full moon to the Mount Fuji, with its white bride veil against that deep blue yet not dark sky background, then, your heart perhaps will heal...if love isn't lost forever...


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“Houki Natsumi”, “sweet seventeen Natsumi”
a little princess of Kobe mountains gentle sides,
with “acarime”, beautiful eyes “slanted upward,”
showing “yancha”, a “mischievous” flash of light.

Around the “uchiike”, secret “garden-pond” I saw
your hair caressed by “kaze”, the “wind” divine,
on a “ninuri yuuyake”, a “sunset painted in red,”
and I was lost forever in the land of Japan.

Your image entered my heart like a “yatou,”
a “burglar that only comes at you by night”
to steal it in its “yuubae”, the “sunset glow,”
leaving after a crystalline “warai”, your “laugh.”

Being an humble “genji”, a humble “foreigner,”
“Koinonayami” or “pain of love now I have,”
my eyes full of “komizu”, my “tears of love,”
flowing like “koinoburi”, the stream of carps.

Receding like “kageboushi”, a “shadow figure,”
small, hiding on your diminutive timberland
of bonsai trees, like an ugly butterfly ashamed
to even be there, like an uninvited little fly.

I wish to be changed into a “ishi”, a garden “stone,”
where beloved Natsumi “suteppusu”, “steps” go by,
with “ureshinamida”, “tears of joy” in her eyes,
as her sweet seventeen are filling her heart.


 

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 Reviews of "Sweet Seventeen (Houki Natsumi)"
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Georg-
What a lesson, I heard none of before!
Amazing she sure is!
and you for writing of her!
I know NOTHING Of Japan, except what they make and we buy!
and I feel I am blessed with their culture even more~! Through you! Thank YOU Georg!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!
God Bless your Year 2008!

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
This is beautiful. The union of these two languages makes this spellbinding. I can feel the mystic beauty of her beauty.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
I spent a wonderful year in Japan, and I have a deep respect for their culture. You have captured some of the gentleness here. this is exceptional.

Walt

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
...beautiful write of love...poetry of finest silk...handpainted by a masters brush...
excellent Georg...
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
A magical enchanting poem so beautifully written Georg! You are a man of many talents! Bravo!My grandson went to Japan for several months of study in computers on a scholarship, and he wants to return. He loved it,and some of those lovely girls you speak of;-)

ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
And the memories creativity paint a beautiful photograph that will last forever....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
Wow! A masterful write my friend...stunning...
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
Hard work has gone in to this sublime romantic write...

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
This is a masterpiece of which I truly enjoyed.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
The beauty in your visual poetry is stunning...

Carole~

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
You never cease to amaze me brother
your write get better with age
like fine wine
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
A perfect kind of love...but not all will see, only a gentle love as yours, love holly

Reviewed on January 14, 2008
Georg you are branching out in new forms and directions, this is a lovely poem.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
Another Master Piece,, flows with much beauty..stunning Georg
Christine

Reviewed on January 14, 2008
Beautifully imaged and penned, this cultural write that transcends all boundries. Well done, Georg, domo arigato. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
What a beauty you have written here sweet man...beautiful writing...stay safe and well...Hugsss

Reviewed on January 14, 2008
Beautiful write, my friend, just lovely! BRAVO! Love the pic!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
George this is a beautiful and loving write, a great write you share with us, Thank you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
George,

This is very good. Very imaginative and worded so beautifully. You had me floating with the excellent imagery.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
Your depth of poetry is amazing as you take us for a ride into its expanse.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
Wow a beautiful and romantic write with a blend of cultural wordings...very well done indeed.

Fee


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