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Dying Love
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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That hand waving goodbye will get blurred as our eyes fill with those tears that we don't want for anyone to see, but that stubbornly, having a mind of their own will roll down like dead little doves...


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Dying love...

…is like a river without the rain
to fill the waves that gives it its life
so it can grow stronger with storms
and hold the returning salmons alive.

…is like an empty crib, without hope
to hold that small bundle, your child,
your eyes looking at the white shadow
as love go on ripping your heart apart.

…is like opening a door after absence
kept you from the way to come back,
with tired feet walking to nowhere
on an unending forever crossing paths.

…is like writing that cruel “dear” letter
to not even a John, but to a someone
that suddenly is wishing that next bullet
have his name, and that it enter his heart.

…is like seeing her happily running towards
the waiting embrace to that another man,
the one you were yesterday full of illusions
but that today you are clearly not that one.

…is like a shroud of sadness over the eyes
that can’t see no more, its world became dark,
dying love doesn’t give room but for pain,
and when in pain we wouldn’t see the light…




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 Reviews of "Dying Love"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on July 16, 2008
This POEM is one of those POEMS, which I can read every day in my life!!!!!!!!! When I want to fill my heart with happiness and beauty, I read some writers. And YOU GEORG MATEOS are one of those WRITERS!!!!!!!!!! I never cry, even if I want to cry, I can't, but reading YOUR sentences I cry almost every time. Some books, POEMS, live century after century, this POEM is one of them!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Glen Schulz
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
Love is truly the mother of all roller coasters indeed. But to live our one and only life and never ride the ride is the saddest thing of all my friend. Wonderful write.
*Glen*

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
This one hits awfully close to home my friend.

Walt

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Almost too painful to read... :~)
You expressed the emotions well.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Very deep and emotional work, Georg...only one who has felt the very pain of this dying love can express it through poem...

very nice work...

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Very true....excellent poem my friend, love holly

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
…is like a shroud of sadness over the eyes
that can’t see no more, its world became dark

So haunting and sad Georg...
Carole~


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Georg, this is a flawless poem defining dying love! I have never seen it said better. Thank you for sharing!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
I give you my last breath,,,,,,Exquisite!

Christine

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
...dying love doesn’t give room but for pain,
and when in pain we wouldn’t see the light…

Maybe for a fleeting moment at times if we go down on our knees...there is a glimps of light at the end of that very dark tunnel!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
...circumstances of dying love...befall hidden tears...your heartfelt write...hidden within perhaps...all.
Excellent Georg...
John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
A sad write Georg that we feel in each word you have shared with us, very well described from the heart. Thank you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Is dying love an oxymoron? Can love ever truly die? Just my thoughts after reading this. You write powerful sentiments from an heart [I think]. May God's love guide you and bring you the same peace that your poem brought me.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Sometimes a dying love feels like you are beating a dead horse. But that doesn't mean you don't grieve for that dead horse.
Open, honest write.
--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Another truly sad piece, brother, and there's probably nothing sadder than dying love.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Deep and intensely personal write and with each stanza the reader aches for the writers pain and a wish that the hurting could be eased. Well done my friend...

Fee

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Oh my,ya got all of us crying sweetie,very well done boohoooooooooo...Hugssssss

Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Heartbreakingly powerful write, Georg; this one is so DARN SAD!! Very well penned; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >tears! <

Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Georg this poem brought me to tears. So poignant and beautifully penned. The similes are perfection and pack a powerful emotional punch.

Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Dying love effectively penned - tears are rolling down my cheeks now. :( Well written, Georg.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(


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