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The Colonel answer Love
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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C'mon we do know better, La Belle Rouge as thrown her glove in the challenge ring to write an answer to her love poem "Summer Storm"
This is my second answer to it.


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Riding behind General Lee I was
marching with the Southern proud,
a long line of Gentlemen in gray
gallant Officers of a gallant South,
after been invited to formal supper
by the marbles arches of the House
framed with fragrant magnolia trees,
of starched petticoats whisper sounds
softly throaty laughter of challenge
like the rashly of high above clouds.

Rose-Mae whip in that kitchen of hers,
not eaten ever on Santee River’s sides,
a meal worth the General’s appraisal
as the gentle breeze blew outside
carrying the soundless steps of peace
that righteous men will have for guide,
Gentlemen will honor until the end
and Officers by that table swear to abide,
not a farewell meal may be allowed to say,
but one to praise we still act civilized.

From the table upright we waited for
the ladies to the Tea Room to retire,
as old Jeremiah passed along Cohibas
and young Mamee poured in our glass
that French brandy from wooden barrels
branded with a word saying Cognac,
putting warming fire on the old soul
of a Colonel holding yet a few many rides
but darn! she isn’t here! where she went?
talked about dipping on the river that one.

The Gentlemen had joined their Ladies,
the Colonel, now alone on the veranda
saw a flurry of lavender garment disappear
among the trees leading to the river path,
and looking around to see anyone near,
after her he went, because she was the one
and only, that could bring his heart to a stop,
that beautiful southern-belle from Savannah,
whose handkerchief the Colonel had stolen
long ago, and now to stole her was the time.

Twice he stepped over dry screaming twigs,
he wasn’t a stalker, a raging bull more liked,
for the noises he was making and that she
couldn’t fail to notice, but she had her pride,
fear she didn’t had, knowing the Colonel was
out there, following her every move, waiting,
so when she reached the river shock her head
and under the moon red hair exploded in fire,
he was looking, she was sure, on her back
she was feeling the burning of his hungry eyes.

Coyly and agonizingly slowly her fingers
unlaced her bustier, letting it fall at her side
and with the languorous movements of a
sorceress, garments heaped in a unruly pile,
until there she was in a flimsy cotton chemie
high heeled boots, stocking and a prayer,
pausing, wondering if she should, why not?
shed pantalettes, exposed and naked a star,
a nymph dipping a toe, probing the waters
wishing the Colonel will hurry his attack.

She move knee’s deep into the river’s waters
when small waves told her he was there now,
feeling the warm of his body almost touching,
with her cheeks full of blushing, turned around,
and suddenly she was pressed against his chest
by two powerful but mot tenderly soldier’s arms,
looking up she saw down from his eyes, tears!
the Colonel had but for happiness the only cry
that he could offer in token of love for his Lady,
as a Gray Uniformed Officer and a Gentleman.

More, we certainly will not tell.

 

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 Reviews of "The Colonel answer Love"
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
What an amazing write to BElles!
YOur heart is so deep and in every word you speak!
A book needs to be gathered with these romantic General/etc. verses!
Write On Southern Gentle man!
Warmest Blessings and hugs, Warrior Lady Sweet Sheooxo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
If this were to be expanded, it would be an incredible romance novel. Georg, you are truly sentimental and romantic. This poem fills my heart with the spirit of love. Boy, what a tale you tell!

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Fine scenario painted with words only.

~W~

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Kept me mesmerized through this entire piece of love and beauty. So very artfully executed, more than worth a second reading.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Love it Georg but are you sure that wasn't General Fee not Lee that he was following?

Fee

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
...well penned in all the ink of romance...given a man with tears...a touch of gray...to be worn and shared with a lady.
beautiful write Georg...
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Georg,you have matched her poem and made a splendid romantic liason fill your readers with delight and passion for more love poems!

Love,
ET

Reviewed on February 9, 2008
You can wear that uniform proudly Sir! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Splendid writing Georg...

Carole~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Merci, Monsieur. Amour et paix et mes meilleurs sentiments,

Régis

Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Dear Colonel you have done the South, and yourself proud with this gorgeous romantic write. How perfect and beautiful from a beautiful and tender heart.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Excellent writing sweetie,take care OK...HUgs

Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Georg,

Gauntlet thrown, picked up and run with - Sir, this is fantastic! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Wonderful write, Georg; you met the challenge well! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
The Gentleman Colonel of Love, not War;
And it's probably best, not to tell more!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Oh Georg and a gentleman you are indeed. Such a lovely come back to LaBelle's write. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose


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