The Old Man Soldier went into the fog enshrouding the fields of his life not to die there, but like another Old Soldier said...to fade away.
Not the sounds of a militar bugle following his shadow, just a lonely guitar for the only one left behind...
Dear Southern Belle, my dearest belle,
remembering your delicate face I am,
your eyes fill with tender expectations
looking into mine for the burning fire,
if they find just a little flicker of sadness
in mine, yours, will explode in one smile.
Resting head on the grass, hair, a bush on fire,
parted lips, ears listening to the river’s calm
breathing softly the peaceful Santee breeze,
mesmerized eyes looking at all those stars…
I don’t need to remember you from any picture
because your image are printed in my mind.
Maybe you don’t remember falling asleep,
with me, and old soldier guarding by your side
to let the good dreams to go marching in
and stop the nightmares with all of my heart;
but I do remember your sweet softly breathing,
suddenly the Southern Belle was my little one.
Long alley of magnolia trees by the cotton fields
tired approaching the veranda a man on his ride
Mamee’s little Joshua running to take the horse,
the flurry of lavender petticoats, you are on site,
my soul exploding then with those my feelings,
no departure can ever compete with a comeback.
Home, nomads have no remember of such thing,
soldier’s home are where they stop and stand,
no walls with old souvenirs nor a house warmth,
just a tent planted there, near the “no man’s land”
Reaching that veranda at a long journey’s end
that I saw the alabaster of two welcoming arms.
Sundown by that secret Santee River of ours
where that little son came down from the skies,
maybe naiveté in a world of such hard turmoil
could have made a place for a loved little one
that was conceived with the most tender care
by a Red Haired flame and one Old Brown Eyes.
Memories falling on a yellow paper illuminated
by a candle burning the last inch of its life.
Written words with a quill that shouldn’t write
once all we want to say as abandoned the dark,
leaving something unforgettable to remember,
the sweet memories of two, by the river’s night.
end of the saga
Smoke covering the fields where men felt,
a thousand shrouds made of cruel war fires
still burning in the memory of an old man
looking without fear the face of the end of life,
but with only one regret that lost among magnolias
is the only love he could ever had and it was denied.
Fate, blame fate they will said but all they ignoring
that fate can’t alone arrange all that is of you inside,
or fill the emptiness void that sucks down your heart
to where even light will not be allowed ever to shine;
you can’t take your sword and pierce fate’s heart
nor forget the pain of what is not for you to have.
“Old soldiers never die; they just fade away”
by Gen. Douglas McArthur
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Reviews of "The Colonel's only one (a final love letter)"
an outstanding write Brother Georg
The gentlemanr colonel of old days of civil war
a rank given to military men as well as well known Gentleman
of society with the wisdom and compassion of judegs
I enjoy your story poetry as if I were reading a historic novel
Peace be with you Brother
Oh my dear friend, what a wonderful and captivating write! Your imagery is excellent...allowing the reader to be transported to a different time and place...so that we can experience an era gone by for ourself! This is breathtaking, one of my favorites I must say...a keeper for me so that I may read it time and time again...
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.
Georg, the vivid imagery you paint with a delicate brush spanning time is breathtaking to say the least. To walk into the shadows and fade away with such a heavy heart leaves me speechless...
Though all things must come to an end, it is exquisite writing such as this that we can't say farewell to! I'm so glad it is just one phase that is over,and you will be here to continue blessing us with your superior poetry!...ET
Oh Sugar! This jest brought me to tears, and went straight into my heart and found a home there! Yore beautiful heart and soul was placed on the Den for all to see and enjoy! HUGS! SC
As always Georg you capture the heart and soul of the country genteleman who lives in all of us. You bring us back in time and make us a part of the landscape as your hero plays out his last line to a slowing lowering curtain. Wonderful work my friend.
Bravo
Fee
Georg,
I fear fate has no mercy sometimes...only a destiny
your last stanza truely hits home for me, many are guilty of passing their own shoulders in blame to another & the displacements of thier responsibility, or fault, or reasons...very good write
Excellent Write of Emotion
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Great historical write. I love to go through Gettysburg Memorial Cemetary and the battlefield and imagine those young men dying and having left their sweethearts and families behind. Statues abound along the road and it is a great day trip. My children loved going there when young and now grandchildren love it too.
We have lived this saga Sweet Colonel and when you are found your Belle will have you moved to a place of repose on the Santee shore under the grand magnolia, where from grief she will soon lie down forever beside you. Oh such a poem, such tears.
I loved him. At age twelve he touched my heart with his music. At age twenty he captured my heart when our eyes met as he sat on a stage and sang Four months later, he fractured my heart with his refusal to allow us to stay together. At age seventy
Love is universal and not limited to the most perfect among us. In this collection of romantic short stories and poetry, love comes to those who are decidedly imperfect, who possess very real human flaws, scars, and challenges. Awaiting us as we are.
I have enjoyed the reading of "The Colonel's only one (a final love letter)".
Thank You for sharing this masterpiece to stimulate studies of the history of America, and to develop appreciation for THE AMERICAN FINE LETTERS.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
The gentlemanr colonel of old days of civil war
a rank given to military men as well as well known Gentleman
of society with the wisdom and compassion of judegs
I enjoy your story poetry as if I were reading a historic novel
Peace be with you Brother
William
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.
Much peace,love, and light,
Amber "V"
Be always safe,
Karen
Tears flowing once again, to see this saga come to an end ... well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
(((HUGS))) and much love from America, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Bravo
Fee
I fear fate has no mercy sometimes...only a destiny
your last stanza truely hits home for me, many are guilty of passing their own shoulders in blame to another & the displacements of thier responsibility, or fault, or reasons...very good write
Excellent Write of Emotion
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie