One Dream Made of Water (poem) by Georg E Mateos on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 21, 2009

WOW! such a soothing sad yearning poem
It reached out and grabbed hold of my heart!
YOU wrote it so well Georg!
The illusion is ONLY in your mind, as LOVE AWAITS!

WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of LOVE, Light, and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on April 18, 2009

Wow this poem took my breath away so sad!!
Georg your words touch the soul of the reader (me )
True love waits!!
Peace Love and Light....and Hugsss...Yolie

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on April 17, 2009

Truly nice work Georg, the emotion you express within this poem could touch the very heart of the soul and make for tears and joy combined...this kind of love is as eluding as it is satisfying...

great work my friend...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

such yearning in this sad,but hopeful poem,
only true love has such patience... sis tl

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Filled with such longing.
Heartfelt I enjoyed "One Dream Made of Water"
Love the way you wrote this Georg

~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Waiting in your patience...to calm her thirst. You romantic and lovely man. She will be the luckiest woman!
Love and sunshine, CarolHawks

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Sometimes all the anticipation can only enhance the wings of love to endure the test of time...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

why, judging from your picture would she need more water Georg, you gave her plenty as I can see, didn't you? you'd give her another drink, would she want it I ask? or am I reading this wrong? I mean, it could well be a most romantic allusion to giving her life again, is it? Just asking, Bless you Pal! Juergen.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

dreams replenish the heart's thirst and keep the soul alive ...

romantically moving with a taste melancholy to it ...

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Hi WE, "I am, trying to convince myself that,
if life becomes a desert, almost,
I will wait...
with my little dream made of water,
to calm your thirst when you arrive�
for ever more."

Maybe we all are fooling ourselves, eh? Remember though, man has never been able to create water, and it is the most powerful, healing creation! All respects to you, my friend...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

You are such a romantic at heart... beautifully written!
Cryssa

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

The whole poem is beautiful but that last line is one of the most tender and romantic I've ever read Georg.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Haunting, romantic and a bit sad...but so very beautiful.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Beautiful yearning and that sentence "With my dream made of water, to calm your thirst when you arrive for ever more." I have not seen anything to match it or convey a love so masterfully.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

What peaceful Dreaming, water induces such calmness. rippling with emotions...
Yes, very nice.
Ty Georg
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Don't ever let your dreams dry up.....beauiful Georg!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Dreams are truly made of many things, including water and tears. May you have a waterfall of happy ones.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

GORGEOUS, Georg, you slake many throats of thirst with these lines - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

yes, beautiful write

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Beautiful writing sweet man...love the picture as always...have a wonderful and safe day..Hugssss

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Like Liana said...so very sad but so very romantic and beautiful!!!
"if life becomes a desert...I will wait..." love these lines.
Great write and photo too!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

I do declare that the directness, openess annd pure outpouring of heart in this one makes it your best work ever. It awakes the mind and haunts the heart in just the right stroke of beauty and sadness. Well done my friend.

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Very good write, Georg; well done, (((my friend)))! Bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Beautiful,very beautiful, very romantic, and very sad!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE EVERY WORD HERE!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva