Are we searching in the water a forgotten past? a forgotten life that thousands of generations before us had the pleasure to be part of?
As a man, I need to ask, is she still there...waiting?
Drowning, and yet, no dying
in the Kingdom of Poseidon,
wrapped forever in wet promises
which weren’t made of tears
but in happiness grandiloquent
exuberance of the lovers
that can’t or will not feel the fears.
Like bubbles in the fading waves
a face full of ebullient smiles,
there’s not goodbyes going out
because back again will it appear
taken from pure and darkened eons
with the moon pulling high ties
that make the waters so unclear.
With emerald colored thoughts,
diamonds in your eyes blues and
a tender promise that’s sparkling
like a coming flashing ethereal spear,
wearing a mischievous smile
and aiming for my waiting lips,
a moment of deep love to share.
As I sink with thousand fathoms
calling me to Circes abyss home
I see you floating away in a carriage
made of a myriad of liquid pearls
with adrift strands of golden hair
that the reaching down jealous sun
are pulling you up for its Princess.
And then an inner storm took me
like a tsunami suddenly around you
my body was like a warm wave
that melted together with the fading girl,
a furious maelstrom, boiling waters,
you, me, and a vortex getting smaller
two lovers pressed into a single tear.
your words Georg are always impressive
you weave love & devotion
the prowess of eternal emotion
we all melt inside your visuals
and the closing visual is amazing...did I say amazing?
Oh Yes Amazing....
Warm Sand & Caressing Tides
Vickie
Well old buddy you may be another year older but your romantism and love of sweet sensual poetry has only grown even sweeter if possible. well done old freind.
fee
INDULGING IN THE 'PAIN' AND 'WISDOM' OF...'FACING REALITY'. A MOST IMPRESSIVE WORK GEORG. YOU ARE...WONDERFULLY GIFTED AND I FEEL BLESSED TO PARTAKE OF THIS GIFT. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD KEEP AND BLESS YOU. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Georg your words have painted a vivid picture
On my mind i can almost see the warm waves
That melted together with the fading girl,
A furious maelstrom, boiling waters,
OMG this is absolutely beautiful the tenderness
Two lovers pressed into a tear
George you turn words into a masterpiece
Brilliant Piece!!
Wishing you Love Peace and Light…Yolie
A majestic masterpiece and a nice change from a mind that has not sunk beneath the sod yet or a love interest left on the beach of life from the waves of youth.
Erotic Interracial/ Reincarnation/ Suspense]
Gale Sinclair is a marriage counselor who has broken the cardinal rule of psychotherapy and fallen in love with his client, Zoelle Sutherland.
Mark
you weave love & devotion
the prowess of eternal emotion
we all melt inside your visuals
and the closing visual is amazing...did I say amazing?
Oh Yes Amazing....
Warm Sand & Caressing Tides
Vickie
Be always safe,
Karen
Lovelovelove,
Sheri
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Regis
you have conjured a palpable scene Edvard. The last line
is the work of a wizard.
r
Love ya Georg.
Your Newfie Friend Hugs, Rose
Georg your words have painted a vivid picture
On my mind i can almost see the warm waves
That melted together with the fading girl,
A furious maelstrom, boiling waters,
OMG this is absolutely beautiful the tenderness
Two lovers pressed into a tear
George you turn words into a masterpiece
Brilliant Piece!!
Wishing you Love Peace and Light…Yolie
Water has a memory...
In Spirit,
Bear
like a tsunami suddenly around you,
my body was like a warm wave
WOW! You must have had quite a birthday, brother.
George