There’s a place I’ve been, where ‘America starts’… Praises, Pennsylvania!
There’s a place I’ve been, where ‘America starts’ road to Paradise therein – who wouldn’t go there
on the promise? - Companions on a passion pilgrimage;
partners chasing history as pleasure pursuit
making memory the past;
wrong turn impressions that last.
Could we do it again, let bucolic byway Bird-in-Hand lead us astray to Intercourse?
Where pastoral-quaint
the charms of Amish country sate
earthly appetites, lend spirit respite –
but beware - make way horse and buggies
roads’ right of ways, Old Conestoga’s hitching posts.
Refresh and compare nearby battlefield fare,
peaceful sojourns lead on from there – Yes!
To war! Where routes converge on Gettysburg armies--Brothers--blundered into each other
for want of shoes. Fought, some died unshod
in field and wood. There – Devil’s Den, the Slaughter Pen looks down on town, rocks Little Round Top! Oh, to retrace their paths, face Pickett’s Charge again!
Would I pen you the merits of Peace and War
but to engage my fancy, your interests, near and afar?
carmen says it so well, so i endorse. your writing just seems to draw one in & provide a vast overview for the reader to arrive, great work
saludos robin
I wonder if future travelers will wander our modern battlefields in such a way... i can't imagine so. Even our battles of yesterday had cleaner lines, a code of honor and ethics, look your opponent in the eye and know their lifeforce for at least the moment... lacking today.
You know what I liked about this H, apart from the imagery, the use of words and the fact that it reminded me of a stay close to Amish country (with a very non - Amish lady.) It is just the length it should be, not squashed or stretched to conform to some spurious blueprint.
On this form you are brilliant.
love
Ian
Helga - I second and endorse every word below and above my praise of your Penn! I like everytking about this one, and it is going into my, "Super," file right now. - Bill
saludos robin
Regis
On this form you are brilliant.
love
Ian
correct names and the facts;-) Superb prose!
Carmen :-)
a beautiful, nostalgic write--well done! brought back memories of ohio's amish country *sigghhhh*
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)