Seem Deepest" (poem) by Kimmy Van Kooten on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tamara Perlin (Reader)

Reviewed on December 15, 2006

A time for falling, and falling still. I know the feeling, or don't I? "We doubled up" I see two spirits coming together as one. Our glasses, somewhat empty, but mostly full. Be it true Love, or Spirit, I love it~ smooth, mysterious, intriguing ~Love, Mara

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 15, 2006

Wonderful, breathless expression of that moment of realisation and breaktrhough. Tender release here, all pressure-points relieved. Has a sighing air about it. Meticulous application to thought and detail. Intriguing analysis. TY K xx

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on December 15, 2006

Beautiful and eloquent.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on December 14, 2006

gee kim, tanks fo de wittig cowection, i's sho does appweciate it. We should change the name of AD to, DE Skul of Witting. great poem

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on December 14, 2006

This is a truly excellent piece Kimmy. You reach out
and touch the spirit with this. Well done.

Allen

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on December 14, 2006

As all of your poems are, Kimmy, this is excellent. A soft and flowing piece and I enjoyed very much.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on December 14, 2006

lovely work ...softly sensual...with a hint of poignancy, which makes the read all that more powerful...excellent work, lady poet.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 14, 2006

sensuously beautiful poetry, Kimmy ...

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on December 14, 2006

Adds another dimension to the phrase, 'she shot him a glance' A glance is all that it needs to capture someone elses eye. On the wing of the glances the keys into each others soul are exchanged.
Intriguing work.

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on December 14, 2006

Too multi layered to give a comment after only one quick reading.
But I love the last line, it seems to resonate in the emptiness that follows.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on December 14, 2006

Splendid job, Kimmy. The last line "Now, I can love..." deeply touches the soul

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 14, 2006

Deeply Profound, Kimmy.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

This is so well expressed Kimmy and has so much reflection of Spirit.

Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

Now you can love and love is life and forever elsewise, it's nothing. I love your poem, Kimmy. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

And that's the most important part, that now you can love. The past is history, write about it but don't relive it. Victor

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

Very well done Kimmy!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

Cathartic fusion of sensuality and acute keeness. To have inkling of Seem Deepest, one would have to touch deep into soul. A cinematic kaleidoscope of dialogue here that I see would be perfect and well-spoken in a Battlestar Galactica or Star Wars type movie where the conversation takes place in a starship in close proximity of sleeping quarters of the female protagonist who is now free to love her male counterpart...you may have just written something here you didn't realize, Kimmy...

Sage

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

Most outstanding write!!

Well done Kimmy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

Kimmy, you are a very beautiful and deep soul~~

Dove

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

"Seem Deepest" a poem that honors the language and flows to the lake of sublimity making vapors of emotions, leaving an aroma of grace and love -- stimulating dreams... IT IS A PRIVILEGED MOMENT, INDEED!

I have enjoyed the reading of ""Seem Deepest"".

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

LIKE THE TENSE BUILD UP BEFORE THE RELEASE, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHA. WANNA FAG

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

Wow, I read this several times, seeing something else in it each time. Beautifully written.

Brett

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 13, 2006

Awesome write Kimmy. Your muse is working overtime with each delicious presentation.